“duchess with a bird”…my poem

“duchess with a bird”…my poem

in stiff embrace…

 

 

duchess with a bird

 

The hennin is the mode,

it weighs upon her head

   but she does not wonder

      that it claims the eye,

it is a tower, but a trifle,

the flaring horns are innocent

   of finery or fancy,

they trail alike to capes

   that hide much of her gown.

 

She flaunts her wealth and her self,

and marvels as she stands alone

   in stiff embrace of the tiny bird,

her new universe, a bird’s horizon,

without joy, nor caper,

she cannot twirl.

 

The bird does not incline to fly,

it has no song,

quiet instants escape their time,

the bird is mystic,

it does not flail or flee,

she moves her empty hand to no avail,

together they make a tableau.

 

She who has no name

   does not think to share a word,

she feels no need to seek for more,

the bird is indistinct, content,

it stays.

 

She is a duchess with a bird,

she tilts her head,

her double-horned hat flares,

it makes a scene,

it conjures trailing musics,

and pomp of court.

 

July 27, 2024

 

Inspired by sculpture at Birch Creek 315, Linden Ponds, Hingham, MA

Revised based on feedback from Dee Bayne

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

Above all: Poems of dawn and more with 73 free verse poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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The Breakfast Club…movie review

The Breakfast Club…movie review

children have real lives…

 

 

Movie review:

The Breakfast Club

 

Which one of the kids in The Breakfast Club (1985, rated R, 97 minutes) is most like you?

Claire (Molly Ringwald), John (Judd Nelson), Andrew (Emilio Estevez), Allison (Ally Sheedy), or Brian (Anthony Hall)?

These are children whose lives you wouldn’t wish on your grandchildren.

Their Saturday detention for various student wrongdoings is a hell-fired playground for growing up and facing truths and learning about the wonderful unknowns of human kindness.

In one brief day they grow and change and assert their special personalities.

They become better people.

The Breakfast Club is funny, it’s sad, and only the kids think there are mysteries.

It becomes a feel good movie.

There’s something more: I imagine that you can’t watch the movie and avoid thinking, even once, “yeah, I was a little bit like that when I was younger.”

I imagine that you’ll take a minute or two,

like I did,

to think about how you’re different now.

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Movie review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: Grace Notes

Is it prose or poetry?

by Brian Doyle

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As with another eye: Poems of exactitude with 55 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

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The Book of Days…part xxxxv

The Book of Days…part xxxxv

The Book of Days

 

The dawn’s early light can be pleasure enough for the whole day.

There are words enough to tell the story of “the temptation of day to come.”

It is my delight to write some of them for your delectation.

 

Sol

 

That fabulous blot of starshine squeezed through

   a hole in the lightening sky…

I wanted to look right through it

   but the uttermost beauty

      is forbidden to our mortal eyes.

 

Yet I turned my eyes to it again,

and tried to stay…

I tried to look closer,

I think I saw an edge

   of pure, celestial delight.

 

Maybe I will imagine more.

I said “good morning.”

 

June 4, 2017

 

It was a transience, a moment for understanding, again, that there is more to sunrise than meets the eye.

 

My poem “Sol” was published in my third collection of 64 poems, In other words: Poems for your eyes and ears.

You can buy it on Amazon (paperback and Kindle),

or get it free in Kindle Unlimited, search for “Richard Carl Subber”

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

You’re down to one piece of bread…

…would you share it with anybody?

Tribe: On Homecoming and Belonging

by Sebastian Junger

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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