Collected Poems of C. K. Williams…book review

Collected Poems of C. K. Williams…book review

over-engineered and under-imagined…

 

 

Book review:

Collected Poems

 

by Charles Kenneth “C. K.” Williams (1936-2015)

Won the 2000 Pulitzer Prize for Poetry

New York: Farrar, Straus, and Giroux, 2006

682 pages

 

Williams was a prolific poet.

His work is relentlessly structural, to the point of being stylized. He’s in love with lines that are almost the same length, and too long for the page. In too many of his Collected Poems, Williams allows every line of text to stray down to the next line, thus abandoning most of the dramatic effects of artful enjambment.

Williams has over-engineered his poetry, for my taste. I tried reading the poems aloud, but that tiresome exercise confirmed my ennui instead of adding some vitality.

For me, whatever Williams was trying to say has been lost in the dusty storeroom where he has neatly boxed and labeled his poems.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

 

St. Ives, another look…

less than meets the eye

by Robert Louis Stevenson

(a book review)

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Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,
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Sad underwear…book review

Sad underwear…book review

Kids will love it

 

 

Book review:

Sad underwear and other complications

by Judith Viorst (b1931)

New York: Atheneum Books for Young Readers, Simon & Schuster, 1995

78 pages

 

This is a great book of great poems that will make little kids laugh, and make big kids laugh, and make parents laugh.

Such as:

 

The Seventh Swimming Lesson

 

Stop the presses.

Call a reporter.

Sally just put her face in the water.

 

How do I know it’s a great book? I’m a grandfather, and it makes me laugh.

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Movie review: A Doll’s House

Henrik Ibsen’s classic on abuse…

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
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what time is it?…Judith Viorst quote

what time is it?…Judith Viorst quote

the drawbridge is creaking…

 

 

“…How can you ask a princess

  To deal with this terrible mess?

  Wake me again in another hundred years.”

 

from the children’s poem “…and after a hundred years had passed, Sleeping Beauty awoke (at last!) from her slumber” by Judith Viorst, in her book Sad Underwear, New York: Atheneum Books for Young Readers, 1995

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Book review: Shakespeare’s Wife

Germaine Greer went overboard a bit…

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Bookjoy, Wordjoy (book review)

Bookjoy, Wordjoy (book review)

una canción

 

 

Book review:

Bookjoy, Wordjoy

 

by Pat Mora (b1942)

New York: Lee and Low Books, Inc., 2018

32 pages

 

una canción del corazón

a song of the heart, Pat Mora’s Bookjoy, Wordjoy

If you read these poems aloud, your feet will start dancing.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

 

Movie review: Same Time, Next Year

all-American adultery, oh yeah…

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In other words: Poems for your eyes and ears with 64 free verse and haiku poems,
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“A Time to Talk,” my version of the poem

“A Time to Talk,” my version of the poem

I welcome the time…

 

I decided to entertain myself at breakfast in the Linden Ponds Café

by doing this little re-write

of Robert Frost’s memorable poem, “A Time to Talk.”

I kept his rhythm and rhyme, I made the text a bit smoother,

I think I preserved his earthy friendly tone.

 

A Time to Talk, Rick’s version

 

When a friend calls down to me from the road

   and slows his horse to just a walk,

I don’t stand still and look around

   on all the hills I haven’t hoed,

and shout from where I am: “What is it?”

I know to welcome time to talk.

I thrust my hoe in the mellow ground,

blade-end up and five feet tall,

I start to climb to the old stone wall

   for a friendly visit.

 

February 3, 2025

Hingham, MA

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Frost’s original version, it’s in the public domain:

 

A Time to Talk

Robert Frost (1874-1963)

 

When a friend calls to me from the road

And slows his horse to a meaning walk,

I don’t stand still and look around

On all the hills I haven’t hoed,

And shout from where I am, What is it?

No, not as there is a time to talk.

I thrust my hoe in the mellow ground,

Blade-end up and five feet tall,

And plod: I go up to the stone wall

For a friendly visit.

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: An Empire on the Edge

by Nick Bunker

The British wanted to win

       the Revolutionary War,

    but they had good reasons

        for not trying too hard…

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Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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“…the hollow men…” and so on

“…the hollow men…” and so on

I’m open to being tantalized…

 


“We are the hollow men

  We are the stuffed men”

 

from “The Hollow Men,” 1925, by T. S. Eliot

Thomas Stearns Eliot (1888-1965)

American-British writer, popularly acclaimed as a great poet of the 20th century

 

At long last, I’ve tried T. S. Eliot’s poetry.

I respectfully think that T. S. Eliot’s poetry is a bloomin’ wasteland…

Maybe I’ll put Collected Poems of T. S. Eliot back on the shelf, and try again after a while.

Maybe not.

It’s not that I mind Eliot’s deliberate contradictions so much. I’m willing to be provoked. I’m open to being tantalized. I’m ready to be pushed or pulled outside my comfort zone.

The sticky point for me, with Eliot’s poetry, is that I never seem to get to the point, or maybe I simply don’t get the point. When I get to the end of one of his longish poems, I’m really not sure where I started, or where I wandered, or where I arrived. 

I find little coherence in Eliot’s words and phrases and passages.

I think of myself as a wordsmith, and I love the beauty of elegant phrases and shimmering, specific, steely, selective, stately, splendid words that tell a delicious story or evoke a bloom of emotion.

For my taste, T. S. Eliot’s poetry isn’t tasty, and it’s a bloomin’ wasteland of jumbled words, fractured images, and unfinished imaginations. 

If you’re wondering where all the flowers have gone, don’t look for answers in Eliot’s work.

 

Source: T. S. Eliot, Collected Poems of T. S. Eliot (New York: Harcourt, Brace & Company, 1958), 101.

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“Fishering,” by Brian Doyle

…what meets the eye…

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