“a wild portal…”…“Passage,” my poem

“a wild portal…”…“Passage,” my poem

a ripple in the sward

 

 

Passage

 

I think to pass the wetlands,

my humdrum steps

   in line to cross the fen,

a thoughtless stroll

   to reach the other side,

but a ripple in the sward turns my foot,

a wrinkled phosphor turns my eye,

I stand, agape, at a wild portal,

its door ajar.

 

I am steeped in wonder.

 

I bethink a new imagination

   of the end of day,

I hurry through,

and, oh!…

 

December 19, 2020

Inspired by “Wilderness Doorway” by Jennifer Lagier, in the Aurorean, Vol. XXV 2020

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Book review: The Bartender’s Tale

Ivan Doig’s story, I mostly loved it…

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
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Pale Rider, pale horse…movie review

Pale Rider, pale horse…movie review

“We all love you, preacher!”

 

 

Movie review:

Pale Rider

 

“And I looked, and behold a pale horse: and his name that sat on him was Death, and Hell followed with him.”

Revelation 6:8

 

Pale Rider (1985, rated R, 115 minutes) goes a bit deeper than your usual Clint Eastwood action thriller.

As “the preacher,” Eastwood creates a mostly low-key character who mostly waxes philosophic about life and its vicissitudes, but also persistently urges the good guys to do some good, and (you’re not surprised) straps on his big pistol when he needs it.

The beleaguered “tin pan” miners, emboldened by “the preacher,” battle the vicious takeover attempts by the big bad rich guy, and you can guess who savors victory.

There’s an almost completely platonic love interest with the mother, Sarah (Carrie Snodgress is divinely demure), and 15-year-old Megan (Sydney Penny) learns a lot about unrequited love.

Pale Rider invites you to look into the hearts of realistic people.

The obvious allusion to Revelation 6:8 (“…behold a pale horse: and his name that sat on him was Death…”) is puzzling. The preacher is not apocalyptic, there is no hint of theology in his role, and he mysteriously and provocatively rides away into the mountains at the last minute, leaving everyone else to resume their lives.

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Movie review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: Shantung Compound

They didn’t care much

        about each other…

by Langdon Gilkey

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Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,
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The snow, its vagrant hues…“Purely,” my poem

The snow, its vagrant hues…“Purely,” my poem

take another look…

 

 

Purely

 

The fallen snow lifts my eyes

as high as everything,

it cloaks all, this gentle tableau,

so white, so grey,

so mottled white in the mix

   of so many of the plainest colors,

so many hints of vagrant hues,

so quiet,

such stillness,

such cold,

such wonted white,

all, all…

 

December 11, 2019

It was all just there, free for the looking…

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Book review: A Pirate Looks at Fifty

   Jimmy Buffett,

      hijinksed,

         slobbering,

              the whole deal…

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Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,
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On Chesil Beach…book review

On Chesil Beach…book review

to each his or her own…

 

 

Book review:

On Chesil Beach

 

by Ian McEwan (b1948)

New York: Nan A. Talese, Doubleday, 2007

203 pages

 

Most likely you will find yourself undeniably drawn to keep turning the pages of On Chesil Beach.

It’s a quiet book, but it’s loaded with exotically passionate words and moments and discoveries about the very private concepts of love that Edward and Florence bring to their marriage in 1962.

There is almost none of the heaving bosom stuff that corrupts so many tales about love, and the language is realistic, almost chaste.

Ian McEwan lets the two lovers try to talk to each other about stuff that they deeply feel but for which they hardly know the words.

There is a sad, and sadly understandable, ending.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: The Financier

Theodore Dreiser’s villain…

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Above all: Poems of dawn and more with 73 free verse poems,
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the kid is talking, listen up!…“Words,” my poem

the kid is talking, listen up!…“Words,” my poem

a rush of words

 

 

Words

 

He’s talking now,

he’s telling tales,

and he repeats

   as he regales

      dear Gram and me

         with words so strong,

and thoughts so deep,

and bits of song.

 

He’s hatching words

   to speak his mind.

He’s gushing words,

each one’s a trace

   of what he’s learned

      or redefined

         or made to fit

            the time and place.

 

This rush of words,

this glib embrace,

this triumph of

   our youngest lad

      is quite a thrill,

a gift each day.

 

His words are real

   but lips and tongue

      are still at play—

we don’t know what

   he means to say.

 

We’ll love it more

   when it’s all straight,

we understand,

his meaning’s clear.

For now we wait,

we make our sounds,

he doesn’t stop

   or hesitate.

He’s in full voice,

it fills the ear,

the sounds of love

   are what we hear.

 

September 2, 2015

Every kid gets to this place, don’t you love it?

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Book review: The Scarlet Letter

the beating hearts…by Nathaniel Hawthorne

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
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