I did not think of ending…my poem

I did not think of ending…my poem

close to myself…

 

 

Dreamery #3

 

I think I knew

   what I was doing,

but I wasn’t sure why.

 

I was close to myself,

I did not heed the whirr

   of my big blower,

knew it would be a long job,

sensed an annoying

   lack of progress,

the work was my duty,

a slow drudgery,

I did not think of ending,

there was a clear space,

I was not curious,

I stepped in it,

 

I didn’t know

   where the leaves would go,

the far wall of that big hall

   was beyond the edge

      of the half-dark,

there was no thought of outside,

so many leaves,

no noise…

 

I woke before the work was done.

 

March 30, 2025

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The Awakening and Selected Stories of Kate Chopin…book review

The Awakening and Selected Stories of Kate Chopin…book review

no fireworks here…

 

 

Book review:

The Awakening

   and Selected Stories of Kate Chopin

 

by Kate Chopin (1850-1904)

Louisiana author

New York: Simon & Schuster Paperbacks, 2004

296 pages

 

There are no fireworks and little spark in Kate Chopin’s prose.

Her characters and her plots seem quotidian at best, and more like hum-drum.

In her time she was a ground-breaking writer of feminist themes, but her stories simply are not thrilling in the 21st century.

As I tried to read The Awakening, I realized that I was trying to imagine how it would have felt doing the same thing 125 years ago. I failed.

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Book review: “The Gentle Boy”

The Puritans had a dark side…

by Nathaniel Hawthorne

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words have physical feeling…a quote

words have physical feeling…a quote

Robert was a deep thinker…

 

 

“Blue” was one of his favorite words.

He liked the feeling it made on his lips

   and tongue when he said it.

Words have physical feeling, not just meaning,

he remembered thinking when he was young.

 

Quote from The Bridges of Madison County by Robert James Waller

New York: Warner Books Inc., 1992

171 pages

p. 8

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“The beginning is always today.”

(quote, Mary Shelley)

so get started…

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The Book of Days…part liii

The Book of Days…part liii

The Book of Days

 

 

The dawn’s early light can be pleasure enough for the whole day.

There are words enough to tell the story of “the temptation of day to come.”

It is my delight to write some of them for your delectation.

 

Gray

 

A nothing sky,

a tasseled waste of cloud,

a pale so drear,

a tease of dawn.

 

August 28, 2024

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Home Team: Poems About Baseball (book review)

Edwin Romond hits another homer…

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