“Darkness begs for light…”…“View,” my poem

“Darkness begs for light…”…“View,” my poem

children show the way…

 

 

View

 

Darkness begs for light.

 

The shaded bower does not fight

   the sun’s traverse,

the first bright ray

   that heralds day…

 

The night embraces all its dark,

at dusk the light well knows

   to fade,

faint stars are meagre,

creatures huddle

   to protect their own,

endings seem to come to fore,

but dawn begins

   to make its way…

 

Great shadows linger

   in the barn’s high reach,

the hay is mounded,

making dark spaces

   where no one goes,

making the hiding spots

   that no one knows,

 

and yet the children

   climb old ladders,

and flounce the hay and shout

   and guard their lantern

      in the shadows,

and heed the lure of dark,

and make some day

   as they make their lark…

 

May 29, 2025

inspired by “…to make sunshine in a shady place.”  from The Sketches of Louisa May Alcott, by Louisa May Alcott, New York: Ironweed Press, Inc., 2001, 282 pages, p. 250

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

As with another eye: Poems of exactitude with 55 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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Traveling Light…book review

Traveling Light…book review

…of pears and bears…

 

Book review:

Traveling Light: Collected and New Poems

 

by David Russell Wagoner (1926-2021)

A prolific American writer, poet, novelist

 

It’s a pleasure to recommend Traveling Light. Wagoner has some heavy duty poetry chops.

Any serious poet can learn from his examples. Repeatedly, as I read through Traveling Light, I wanted to pick up my pen and grab a piece of paper and try my hand at writing the images he sees.

Readers, dig in! Wagoner finds the right words for those feelings, those realities that you didn’t imagine before you read his intuitions…

 

…such as, feeding a whole sack of fresh pears to a camel in the zoo:

“…She watched me disappear,

Then with a rippling trudge went back to her stable

To snort, to browse on hay, to remember my sack forever.

She’d been used to having no pears, but hadn’t known it…”

 

…such as, on meeting a bear in the bear’s own woods:

“…Withdraw without turning and start saying

Softly, monotonously, whatever comes to mind

Without special pleading:

Nothing hurt or reproachful to appeal to his better feelings.

He has none, only a harder life than yours…”

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Poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

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The Book of Days…part lv

The Book of Days…part lv

The Book of Days

 

The dawn’s early light can be pleasure enough for the whole day.

There are words enough to tell the story of “the temptation of day to come.”

It is my delight to write some of them for your delectation.

 

Caprice

 

The clouds pretend to lithic form

   but they are sprites

      that will not stay,

all shifting shapes

   of wisp and white

      and blur and bulge and gray…

 

July 20, 2020

Lake Winnipesaukee, NH

 

Published in March-April 2024 issue of Creative Inspirations

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: The Scarlet Letter

the beating hearts…by Nathaniel Hawthorne

click here

Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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