“…let immensity swell again”…“a style of song,” my poem

“…let immensity swell again”…“a style of song,” my poem

he rang a bell…

 

 

a style of song

 

He wore rough clothes,

scuffed heavy shoes,

he knew where he was going

   but he kept a shuffle pace,

 

he had no look of joy,

there was no kind of sparkle,

only placid look ahead,

as if starting out on plain old day…

 

with quiet voice he rang a bell,

he filled the silence,

I could tell

   he was no stranger to the song—

 

he sang the word:

   “somewhere…”

and took a breath

   and let immensity swell again,

and murmured:

   “…over the…”

and I wanted to help him sing.

 

he kept on walking…

December 19, 2024

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: Mila 18

horrific truth by Leon Uris

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Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
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The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie…movie review

The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie…movie review

Cue the “Brodie girls”…

 

 

Movie review:

The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie

 

The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie (1969, rated PG, 116 minutes) is all Maggie Smith, all the time.

There is a story line: deeply committed and outspoken teacher pushes young girls to maturity while she dabbles in love and grasps everywhere for approval.

Miss Jean Brodie (Smith) creates a mostly adoring set of “Brodie girls” as she flourishes and flaunts and flounders at the Marcia Blaine School for Girls in 1930s Edinburgh.

She leaves a trail of broken hearts and endures the ultimate humiliation of losing her job after she is “betrayed” by a student who almost grows up in the process.

Good acting, good story, good entertainment.

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Movie review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

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the dude ranch dog…“Oh, LeRoy!” my poem

the dude ranch dog…“Oh, LeRoy!” my poem

a dog like him…

 

 

Oh, LeRoy!

 

It’s just not true that every ranch

   has to have a dog like him,

but try to name a place that calls

   itself a ranch, and claims with pride

      to be a place where cowboys ride,

and doesn’t have a lanky pooch

   who sleeps in all the darnedest spots,

and loves a scratch, and likes the kids,

and knows his name is LeRoy.

 

Every dude at Smith Fork Ranch

   made friends with him without delay,

and learned his name, and scratched his head,

and waved him into line to join

   the hike up to the bears’ own ridge,

and cheered him on when he detoured

   to splash around in that high pond,

and made a point, back at the ranch,

to grab a treat from LeRoy’s jar

   and make him “Sit!” (he almost did).

 

You’ll guess these stories never end,

but you don’t know that we were there

   on our last day, when that old truck

       made too much noise in passing by,

and LeRoy knew—to keep us safe—

   he had to snarl and bark and run

      to chase that truck—but oh!, too close…

 

He never knew how many tears,

so many tears we had for him.

 

October 15, 2016

 

Sadly, LeRoy died at Smith Fork Ranch, Crawford, CO, in September 2007.

 

My poem “Oh, LeRoy!” was published in my second collection of 47 poems, Seeing far: Selected poems.

You can buy it on Amazon (paperback and Kindle),

or get it free in Kindle Unlimited, search for “Richard Carl Subber”

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Book review: The Sea Runners

…it informs, but it does not soar…

by Ivan Doig

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Winesburg, Ohio…book review

Winesburg, Ohio…book review

humanity surging…

 

 

Book review:

Winesburg, Ohio

 

by Sherwood Anderson (1876-1941)

Simon & Brown, 1919, 2012

208 pages

 

The reader of Winesburg, Ohio (1919) is tempted to think of Edgar Lee Masters’ Spoon River Anthology (1915), but the reader should resist the temptation.

There is very little of society in Spoon River, and so much of society in each of Anderson’s short stories. The humanity surges in these stories, and they touch so many memories of being with other people and making life happen.

At the end of each story—“Nobody knows,” “The untold lie,” and the list goes on—the reader wonders:

     is there more?

     is there more to know?

     is there more truth?

It’s easy to put this book down, and it’s easier to pick it up again.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: The Proud Tower

…a lot more than a history book…

by Barbara Tuchman

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The Book of Days…part xlix

The Book of Days…part xlix

The Book of Days

 

The dawn’s early light can be pleasure enough for the whole day.

There are words enough to tell the story of “the temptation of day to come.”

It is my delight to write some of them for your delectation.

 

 

a tasting

 

…the second look is the keeper.

 

The clouds are shifting shapes,

moving quickly

   across the new morning sky,

the smudge and fold of flannel,

becoming flan,

nudging the smear

   of cream sauce,

filling the sky

   with hasty pudding

      and the like,

making a menu

   that lasts mere moments…

 

January 4, 2025

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Book review: To Serve Them All My Days

by R. F. Delderfield

A beloved teacher,

      you know this story…

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many waters: more poems with 53 free verse poems,
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