Roosters scream to start the day…

Roosters scream to start the day…

roosters know much…

 

 

An anonymous and potentially wise person said:

 

“The older I get, the more I understand

why roosters just scream to start their day.”

 

…and one of my top favorite authors says she’s learned from others about the merits of this quick morning prayer:

“Whatever!”

 

I used to recite this one when I rolled out of bed:

“It’s show time!”

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Book review: The Sea Runners

…it informs, but it does not soar…

by Ivan Doig

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Whack!…the old glove…my poem

Whack!…the old glove…my poem

a good glove gets old…

 

 

Whack!

 

Funny how it still fits my hand

   after so many years,

I remember the stitching

   and the thick pad at my palm.

It’s a “Rickey Henderson” glove,

I forgot the name.

 

The thing is,

a good glove gets old

   but it’s still good,

the whack of a line drive

   in the pocket

      still sounds big,

you whack your hand

   into the pocket

      ten thousand times,

and the last one

   still feels good,

and when my son,

a man now,

says “Dad, here’s your glove,”

he means:

“Here’s the glove

   you let me use

      a couple times

         instead of my kid glove,

I always wanted

   to have this glove,

and now I do,

but you can use it

   for a while…

it’s still yours.”

 

August 17, 2024

 

your grandson probably can throw better than you…

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Old Friends (book review)

Tracy Kidder tells truth about old age…

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Atonement…movie and book review

Atonement…movie and book review

unforgettable…

 

 

Movie review and book review:

Atonement

 

Atonement is a story of lives of irredeemable sadness. Ian McEwan wrote the book that is faithfully portrayed in this 2007 film (rated R, 123 minutes)—it got seven Oscar nominations—starring Keira Knightley (Cecilia), James McAvoy (Robbie), Romola Garai (child Briony), Saoirse Ronan (18-year-old Briony), and Vanessa Redgrave (mature Briony).

In brief: Briony, a child, tells a dreadful lie about her sister’s lover, forcing Cecilia and Robbie to live separate, desperately tormented lives during World War II.

This poem is my “Thumbs Up” review of the movie and the book.

 

Unforgettable

 

This memory is lava hot,

it mingles, lava slow,

in all my thoughts,

in all my mind.

 

It is a crumble, peat, dark,

peat rich, no single whole,

but bits of all.

I cannot grasp it entire.

 

It fills me,

it is full of me,

full with my dread imaginings,

full with my discarded dreams,

so full…

 

It burns, it sears,

a red haze in my every gaze,

a scarlet shackle on each heartbeat.

 

I accept the impotence of atonement.

 

My long-ago childish deed cannot be undone,

that indulgence in excitement

   and attention and novelty

      and vengeance and purest love.

 

Unbidden, I saw an act I didn’t understand,

two lovers, I cherished them,

their coupling had no inner meaning for me,

yet showed they had more love for each other

   than each for me…

 

Later, a twisted crime he did not—could not—commit,

yet I accused—“I saw him”—I lied,

to hurt him and to keep her, apart, for me.

That lie broke them.

At that moment, the words tasted brave

   and older than my years.

The taste became gall.

Later, I was to know that I killed them.

My life has been my penance.

 

Now I understand what I could not see

   and could not then feel.

Now I feel their horror that I invented

   in place of their happiness.

Now I endure the unhappiness

   they could not escape,

the terror born of a child’s simple plan

   in a child’s heart.

 

…I keep those false words—“I saw him”—

spoken in righteous innocence,

in unknowable ignorance,

in unremembered pleasure…

 

I did not know I was trading my portion of happiness

   for a memory that I keep

      in a hole in my heart.

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Movie review. Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

In other words: Poems for your eyes and ears with 64 free verse and haiku poems,
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the fox on crusted snow, “Exit” my poem

the fox on crusted snow, “Exit” my poem

who’s watching whom…

 

 

Exit

 

I lingered after light sleep,

the empty snowbound afternoon was my prospect,

a warming wrap was my comfort,

no urge disturbed my rest,

the necessity of loneliness pinched my gaze…

 

I think the fox had been watching me

   in my windowed bay,

I think she had one snuff of fear,

I think she paused, on the crusted snow,

and found no scent of interest,

I think she may have wondered

   how I could feel at ease

      in my tight world…

 

I raised one hand in greeting and adieu,

and she took her own royal time

   in walking away on her grand stage.

 

November 8, 2018

Inspired by “Closer” by Roberta Marggraff in the Fall/Winter 2018-2019 issue of the Aurorean.

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Book review: The Scarlet Letter

the beating hearts…by Nathaniel Hawthorne

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The Collected Poems of Sara Teasdale…book review

The Collected Poems of Sara Teasdale…book review

Teasdale teases…

 

 

Book review:

The Collected Poems of Sara Teasdale

 

by Sara Teasdale (1884-1933)

New York: The Macmillan Co., 1937.

311 pages

 

Sara Teasdale wrote about 350 poems, and some of them are quite long.

She is literate—no doubt about that, there are plenty of classical allusions to the gods.

For my taste, there is no personality in her Collected Poems—she writes “about” stuff instead of illuminating stuff.

In 1918 she won a Pulitzer Prize for poetry—it must have been a lean year.

There are bright notes here and there:

 

“Ah, Love, there is no fleeing from thy might,

No lonely place where thou hast never trod,

No desert thou hast left uncarpeted.”

 

from “Sappho,” p. 109

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Book review: To Serve Them All My Days

by R. F. Delderfield

A beloved teacher,

you know this story…

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