The Asking…some poetic insights…book review

The Asking…some poetic insights…book review

warm blasts of beautiful…

 

 

Book review:

The Asking: New and Selected Poems

 

by Jane Hirshfield (b1953)

New York: Alfred A. Knopf, 2023

343 pages

 

There is lots to like and lots to pass over in Jane Hirshfield’s poetry.

Most often her style boils down to the “wild child” type, apparently she’s not too concerned with the idea of “the best words in the best order.” Many of her poems strike me as disorderly, albeit enthusiastic.

I think it’s worth reading through Hirshfield’s The Asking collection to get the taste and the occasional warm blast of beautiful insight and intuition. Here’s a taste:

 

“Stone did not become apple….Yet joy still stays joy.” (from “Counting, New Year’s Morning, What Powers Yet Remain to Me”)

 

“She closed her eyes,

opened her mouth

to receive the end of her life.

Its last tasting.” (from “A Day Just Ends”)

 

“The impossible closes around

like a smooth lake

on an early morning swim.” (“Everything That Is Not You”)

 

“How sad they are,

the promises we never return to.” (from “Autumn Quince”)

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: The Myths of Tet

How people get killed by lies…

by Edwin E. Moïse

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Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,

and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)

and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

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treadmill thoughts…“and old sneakers,” my poem

treadmill thoughts…“and old sneakers,” my poem

again is anew…

 

 

…and old sneakers

 

We move, we huff,

we quiver, we chant,

thoughts galore will tumble

   as the hot routine deepens,

 

the workout is good,

no doubt,

we mime the young

   as we get old,

we walk the track,

the countless reps,

the 1-2-3, the look-and-see,

the bobbled step,

the front and back,

the in-and-out…

 

This cheerless time,

this silent gym,

this jumbled gear,

the shadowed clock…

look the same as yesterday,

but…

 

I conjure me,

a brand new thought,

a slower step,

I see a different future,

the silence is a private tune,

 

I whisper behind my eyes

   that more is more,

again is anew,

the moving is progress,

it is long moments in my life.

 

November 24, 2024

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Movie review: Same Time, Next Year

it’s all-American adultery, oh yeah…

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Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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Meditation for Fidgety Skeptics…book review

Meditation for Fidgety Skeptics…book review

it’s not “extra”…

 

 

Book review:

Meditation for Fidgety Skeptics

 

by Dan Harris and Jeff Warren, with Carlye Adler

New York: Spiegel & Grau, 2017

286 pages

 

I tried meditation once, about 20 years ago or so, and, I confess, I didn’t stick with it.

It seemed like an “extra” thing to do, and I think I felt like I was busy enough.

Harris makes a believable case for giving it a try.

He has good news, in part: you don’t have to sit cross-legged with your knees painfully lowered, you don’t have to pick any kind of “mantra,” and you can start off with 5 or 10 minutes a day—and he repeatedly says “one minute of meditation absolutely counts.”

I’m retired, and now I know I have the time to meditate if I feel like it.

I can count my breaths, so I can get started.

I’ve tried it a couple times already, and, I confess, I think there is a welcome stillness connected to the whole thing.

I think there may be a new way to be me.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

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no kicking or biting…says Seneca

no kicking or biting…says Seneca

don’t bite back…

 

 

“How much better it is to take the opposite course

   and not to match fault with fault.

     Would any one think that he was well balanced

        if he repaid a mule with kicks

          and a dog with biting?”

 

Seneca (4 BC-65 CE), On Anger (De Ira), 3.27.2

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Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: Seven Gothic Tales

by Isak Dinesen,

lush and memorable stories…

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Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

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“…let immensity swell again”…“a style of song,” my poem

“…let immensity swell again”…“a style of song,” my poem

he rang a bell…

 

 

a style of song

 

He wore rough clothes,

scuffed heavy shoes,

he knew where he was going

   but he kept a shuffle pace,

 

he had no look of joy,

there was no kind of sparkle,

only placid look ahead,

as if starting out on plain old day…

 

with quiet voice he rang a bell,

he filled the silence,

I could tell

   he was no stranger to the song—

 

he sang the word:

   “somewhere…”

and took a breath

   and let immensity swell again,

and murmured:

   “…over the…”

and I wanted to help him sing.

 

he kept on walking…

December 19, 2024

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: Mila 18

horrific truth by Leon Uris

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Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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