“…downbeat for the dawn…”…”Overture,” my poem

“…downbeat for the dawn…”…”Overture,” my poem

a kind of music of the spheres…

 

 

Overture

 

I stood awhile in prescient dark,

faint sounds of night

   were near and far,

a rustling song,

a sylvan chord,

a tiny thrum,

and more—

 

a downbeat for the dawn to come,

scant chorus rising,

I whispered hallowed words

   to make a coda,

and waited for the star of day.

 

January 21, 2023

 

Inspired by “Behind Stowe” (1927) by Elizabeth Bishop (1911-1979)

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My poem “Overture” was published in my sixth collection of 74 poems, Above all: Poems of

dawn and more.

You can buy it on Amazon (paperback and Kindle),

or get it free in Kindle Unlimited, search for “Richard Carl Subber”

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: The Scarlet Letter

the beating hearts…by Nathaniel Hawthorne

click here

 

In other words: Poems for your eyes and ears with 64 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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Saturday Night Live may be older than you

Saturday Night Live may be older than you

Yeah, sure, M*A*S*H, okay…

 

 

The average American today wasn’t alive

when Saturday Night Live did the first live broadcast

in October 1975.

 

If you’re like me, you cherish your memories of The Good Ones who made SNL a hit: I’m talking Chevy, John, Dan, Gilda, Garrett, Jane, and Laraine, you know who I’m talking about.

Pick your favorite, right? C’mon, nobody can pick one favorite out of that lineup.

For starters, Roseanne Roseannadanna. Love ya, Gilda. Priceless. Non pareil.

And then there was the “Point/Counterpoint” commentary with Dan and Jane, that ignorant slut.

I could go on.

Of course it’s true that SNL today isn’t what it used to be.

I think all the diamonds were polished in the 1970s.

OK, OK, M*A*S*H was a contender, I figured you’d bring that up.

 

The first SNL sketch, click here

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Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: American Colonies

So many and so much

    came before the Pilgrims

by Alan Taylor

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

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another take on dawn…my poem

another take on dawn…my poem

no calories added

 

 

Sweet thing

 

The dawn delays the day,

with layered hues

   that do not fade,

 

the vault is cake,

with icing smears

   that will not bake,

 

the sweet spot filled,

an overflow

   of cream and gold,

the lavish spread

   betokens gild.

 

February 10, 2026

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

 

The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie…movie review

it’s all Maggie Smith

click here

many waters: more poems with 53 free verse poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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Aging: An Apprenticeship…book review

Aging: An Apprenticeship…book review

it’s not the last obscenity…

 

 

Book review:

Aging: An Apprenticeship

 

Nan Narboe, ed.

Portland, OR: Red Notebook Press, 2018

286 pages

 

Narboe created a handy and wide-ranging collection of reflections on the art, science, and humanity of the aging process. More than 50 authors tell it like they think it is, for folks nearing the increasingly ordinary age of 50, and for folks in their 50s, 60s, 70s , 80s, and 90s and beyond. If you’re not in one of those groups, you will be sooner than you think.

Of course, the explicit premise of most of the authors in Aging: An Apprenticeship is that life can be good (or not), aging happens to everyone, and dying is the end game.

Gloria Steinem’s contribution is on point, completely tolerable, and instructive. She says:

“After all, we are communal creatures

   who must mirror each other to know who we are.

Every living thing ages and dies,

   yet humans seem to be the only species

      that thinks about aging and thinks about dying.

Surely, we are meant to use this ability,

   especially in a country

      that suffers so much from concealing aging and dying

         as if they were the last obscenities.”

For Aging: An Apprenticeship, Narboe has collected essays that range from whimsical to doggone serious. Each author offers a very personal argument that aging and dying are 100% natural.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

 

A quote from General Custer

Hint: something to do with Indians…

click here

In other words: Poems for your eyes and ears with 64 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

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“mantra,” with dancing…my poem

“mantra,” with dancing…my poem

it’s the dancing…

 

 

mantra

 

Let your hands pray,

let your eyes dance,

let your self embrace

   the beginning

      of the rest

         of your life.

 

April 13, 2026

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

Book review: A Cold Welcome

The culprit was global cooling,

     500 years ago…

by Sam White

click here

many waters: more poems with 53 free verse poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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