“…the great brutes…”  “Revelation,” my poem

“…the great brutes…”  “Revelation,” my poem

behind the frosted mist…

 

 

Revelation

 

 

Beyond my domain, I leaned ahead

   to cross the slope

      under a brazen sky.

In the chill of dawn, I stopped.

 

The apparition…

A bull appeared.

 

He turned his horns to me,

showed no fear,

no gaze of knowing,

no sentient nod,

he stepped away…

 

Another creature shambled near,

regarded me with innocence,

and scarcely paused,

his brawny flank rippling slowly

   as he passed on…

 

I stretched my eye

   to the scant egress

      of these beasts with iron mien.

Indeed, I had not crossed the path

   of a rambling herd.

 

I chanced to find

   the portal of an ancient furnace of the gods,

who took such wild ores as they desired,

and stoked their smokeless fires

   behind the frosted mist,

and conjured life,

and smelted the great brutes—

   cold-forged in the chill of dawn—

      who stepped heavily across my path

         and did not mistake me

            for their kind.

 

January 7, 2020

Inspired by this quotation:

“I had seen a herd of buffalo, 129 of them, come out of the morning mist under a copper sky, one by one, as if the dark and massive, iron-like animals with the mighty horizontally swung horns were not approaching but were being created before my eyes and sent out as they were finished.”

by Isak Dinesen

in Out of Africa (1938)

 

My poem “Revelation” was published in my sixth collection of 73 poems, Above all: Poems of dawn and more.

You can buy it on Amazon (paperback and Kindle),

or get it free in Kindle Unlimited, search for “Richard Carl Subber”

“Revelation” also was published in my fifth collection of 53 poems, My first name was rain: A dreamery of poems.

You can buy it on Amazon (paperback and Kindle),

or get it free in Kindle Unlimited, search for “Richard Carl Subber”

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: Seven Gothic Tales

by Isak Dinesen,

lush and memorable stories…

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

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her cherub chatter…“and more…” my poem

her cherub chatter…“and more…” my poem

Dear, dear sprite…

 

 

and more…

 

Her lightest step is all she needs

   to round the garden in her tour,

she makes no stand,

and fills the air with cherub chatter,

she makes scant imprint in the earth…

 

The elfin miss delights in play,

so wild, winsome,

willing to sing

   what happiness she feels,

we little know its measure

   nor the nature of her laugh, her smile,

the chirp of her siren sound.

 

Dear, dear sprite, she hops and bounces,

we scarcely reck the eldritch stuff,

what seems of perverse end

   does not sustain a care

      beyond the moment’s wisp of dread

         that’s clapped away in her dance.

 

Her lightest step is all she needs

   to round the garden in her tour,

she makes no stand,

she flutters, frisks in merriment,

and makes her joy…

 

June 12, 2022

Inspired by the child, Pearl, in The Scarlet Letter by Nathaniel Hawthorne.

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

How does a poem end?

Finis,” my thoughts (my poem)

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As with another eye: Poems of exactitude with 55 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

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“a wild portal…”…“Passage,” my poem

“a wild portal…”…“Passage,” my poem

a ripple in the sward

 

 

Passage

 

I think to pass the wetlands,

my humdrum steps

   in line to cross the fen,

a thoughtless stroll

   to reach the other side,

but a ripple in the sward turns my foot,

a wrinkled phosphor turns my eye,

I stand, agape, at a wild portal,

its door ajar.

 

I am steeped in wonder.

 

I bethink a new imagination

   of the end of day,

I hurry through,

and, oh!…

 

December 19, 2020

Inspired by “Wilderness Doorway” by Jennifer Lagier, in the Aurorean, Vol. XXV 2020

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: The Bartender’s Tale

Ivan Doig’s story, I mostly loved it…

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Above all: Poems of dawn and more with 73 free verse poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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The snow, its vagrant hues…“Purely,” my poem

The snow, its vagrant hues…“Purely,” my poem

take another look…

 

 

Purely

 

The fallen snow lifts my eyes

as high as everything,

it cloaks all, this gentle tableau,

so white, so grey,

so mottled white in the mix

   of so many of the plainest colors,

so many hints of vagrant hues,

so quiet,

such stillness,

such cold,

such wonted white,

all, all…

 

December 11, 2019

It was all just there, free for the looking…

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: A Pirate Looks at Fifty

   Jimmy Buffett,

      hijinksed,

         slobbering,

              the whole deal…

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My first name was rain: A dreamery of poems with 53 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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the kid is talking, listen up!…“Words,” my poem

the kid is talking, listen up!…“Words,” my poem

a rush of words

 

 

Words

 

He’s talking now,

he’s telling tales,

and he repeats

   as he regales

      dear Gram and me

         with words so strong,

and thoughts so deep,

and bits of song.

 

He’s hatching words

   to speak his mind.

He’s gushing words,

each one’s a trace

   of what he’s learned

      or redefined

         or made to fit

            the time and place.

 

This rush of words,

this glib embrace,

this triumph of

   our youngest lad

      is quite a thrill,

a gift each day.

 

His words are real

   but lips and tongue

      are still at play—

we don’t know what

   he means to say.

 

We’ll love it more

   when it’s all straight,

we understand,

his meaning’s clear.

For now we wait,

we make our sounds,

he doesn’t stop

   or hesitate.

He’s in full voice,

it fills the ear,

the sounds of love

   are what we hear.

 

September 2, 2015

Every kid gets to this place, don’t you love it?

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: The Scarlet Letter

the beating hearts…by Nathaniel Hawthorne

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In other words: Poems for your eyes and ears with 64 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

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at Duck Harbor Beach… “Sea quell,” my poem

at Duck Harbor Beach… “Sea quell,” my poem

quiet is what it was…

 

 

Sea quell

 

The immensity

   shrinks to my gaze, and is still,

and the silence grows.

 

Duck Harbor Beach

Wellfleet, MA

September 9, 2019

 

Sitting on the sand at Duck Harbor Beach,

the bay was making absolutely no noise, it was dead quiet.

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

American Character: A History of the Epic Struggle…

Colin Woodard makes it easier to understand…(book review)

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Above all: Poems of dawn and more with 73 free verse poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

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