“…a metamorphosis brought them alive…”…”Momentary,” my poem

“…a metamorphosis brought them alive…”…”Momentary,” my poem

no portent of delight…

 

 

Momentary

 

There is beauty in being,

stunning beauty of the moment,

when creature and bloom

   make a tiny community of two,

the flower offering so much,

as if caring to give energy for life,

the butterfly taking so little.

 

No guardian brings them together

   to share goodness

      for futures they do not share,

a metamorphosis brought them alive

    but did not portend delight,

did not augur the beautiful exchange,

it set them free to play a role,

their give and take is feeding my soul.

 

August 3, 2022

Published in Creative Inspirations, Sep-Oct 2022 issue

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Above all: Poems of dawn and more with 73 free verse poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
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Evidence, more Mary Oliver poems…book review

Evidence, more Mary Oliver poems…book review

her words are arrows…

 

 

Book review:

Evidence

 

by Mary Oliver (1935-2019)

Boston: Beacon Press, 2009

74 pages

 

Guilty, guilty, guilty. With Evidence, Mary Oliver is guilty once again of nailing me to the floor so I can read every single poem in her book, one after the other.

Her style encourages me to think that I can write more and better poetry, because she makes it seem so easy to choose the right words, in the right order. Mary speaks straight from her heart, she uses exacting words as arrows to find precise targets in vision and imagination, and she leaves out all the other stuff.

Despite the mountain of her years, we have Evidence: Mary Oliver climbed to the highest branches. Here’s an excerpt from “About Angels and About Trees”:

 

“…what I know is that

  they rest, sometimes,

in the tops of the trees

 

and you can see them,

  or almost see them,

or, anyway, think: what a

  wonderful idea…

 

The trees, anyway, are

  miraculous, full of

angels…and certainly

  ready to be

the resting place of

  strange, winged creatures

that we, in this world, have loved.”

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2023 All rights reserved.

 

“Boil up” and other good manners…

The “Hobo Ethical Code” is worth a quick read.

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In other words: Poems for your eyes and ears with 64 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
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“…a word spoken in due season…”…Proverbs 15:23

“…a word spoken in due season…”…Proverbs 15:23

words for all seasons…

 

 

“…and a word spoken in due season,

                how good is it!”

 

Proverbs 15:23

The Bible, King James Version

 

Samuel Taylor Coleridge said poetry is “the best words in the best order.”

Happily, words that are spoken in due season often are the best words.

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A quote from General Custer

Hint: something to do with Indians…

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Above all: Poems of dawn and more with 73 free verse poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
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“la nuit qui est tout seul…”…”Nuit,” my poem

“la nuit qui est tout seul…”…”Nuit,” my poem

s’agit d’amour…

 

 

Nuit

 

La nuit me dit,

”Mon cher, qu’as tu?”

et je réponds,

“Rien…mais oui,

encore je pense à elle

   qui est ma chère depuis…”

 

Ma vie en toute,

mon âme, ma femme,

le même pour moi…

 

S’agit d’amour, cher noir,

la nuit qui est tout seul…

et moi aussi.

1968

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“Tear it up,” says Kurt Vonnegut

“Write a six line poem, about anything…

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“…the proud peaks relent…”…“natura,” my poem

“…the proud peaks relent…”…“natura,” my poem

where do you belong?

 

 

natura

 

I march in the hills,

I sleep in grassy vales,

the proud peaks relent, betimes,

they hold my footsteps

   in high places,

and I look down again

   on sylvan slopes

      that beck to me

         and open to my passing through,

I wet my feet in waters

   with no name,

I rest in bosky dells,

and I sing a forest song…

 

I belong to all this beauty.

 

July 10, 2023

inspired by “Ascent” by Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer, as published July 9, 2023, on her website, A Hundred Falling Veils

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Oops, Columbus didn’t “discover” America

…but he got close…

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As with another eye: Poems of exactitude with 55 free verse and haiku poems,
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“…she doesn’t see the sidewalk…”… “Taking a walk,” my poem

“…she doesn’t see the sidewalk…”… “Taking a walk,” my poem

the yearling ahead of the herd

 

 

Taking a walk

 

There she goes again.

She’s running ahead, beyond my reach,

she stops and waits if I call loud enough,

but she doesn’t shout back.

Taking a walk

   isn’t something she needs to do

      in measured steps with me.

 

It’s the daring.

I think she’s not testing limits,

she’s learning what to do,

and how to do it,

before a limit comes into view,

before it makes her mindful.

 

It’s the dashing.

It’s not escape, it’s exuberance.

It’s a style of open plains loping,

she doesn’t see the sidewalk

   that I’m following,

she’s following the instinct

   of the yearling ahead of the herd.

 

It’s the dancing.

She runs, she skips,

she jumps, she hears a music

   that has nothing to do

      with my cautions

         or my grown-up obligation

            or my protective love.

 

It’s the doing.

I understand that she is

   reaping new experiences in her life.

There is no danger outside my imagination.

The coyotes are out of range,

I’m sure of it and she depends on me.

 

She is a dasher, a dancer and a prancer,

and it is my joy

   to scramble to catch up to her again.

 

April 22, 2017

My oldest granddaughter likes being out in front. She has never actually ranged far enough ahead to be out of my sight. I don’t know if she would go that far. I guess she wouldn’t do it deliberately. I don’t really think she might be attacked by a dog rushing out from the next home she passes…I can’t get that completely out of my mind. I can guess at the horizons she’s pushing back in her mind. She won’t understand the joy/fear in my mind until she’s a lot older. There are three more grandkids in line behind her. I’m learning to walk faster.

 

My poem “Taking a walk” was published in my second collection of 47 poems, Seeing far: Selected poems.

You can buy it on Amazon (paperback and Kindle),

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Movie review: Same Time, Next Year

all-American adultery, oh yeah…

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
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and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

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