“…another step to futures…”…“Look up,” my poem

“…another step to futures…”…“Look up,” my poem

think a good thought…

 

 

Look up

 

Sure enough, another dawn

   released another day,

a chance to see this old world

   another way,

to take another step to futures,

 

a blink in time, oh sure,

but another whole day

   to be alive,

to think a good thought,

to pause just once

   to really spy the sallow clouds

      and glance across the doughy sky,

and chance to see

   that patch of personality

      in the western span,

to think that, yes,

   the clouds have their own time,

in separate beats,

and I can savor mine.

 

June 29, 2024

 

(Modified with feedback from Dee Bayne)

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Book review: Saint Joan

by George Bernard Shaw

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My first name was rain: A dreamery of poems with 53 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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“Dear blue sky…”…my poem

“Dear blue sky…”…my poem

thinking blue…

 

 

Re: sky

 

Dear blue sky,

 

Suddenly I know that you are always here,

and suddenly you seem

   more of a comfort than I had known.

 

I want to think more

   about tomorrow’s day,

and the streaming days of summer,

and the stormy days

   that hide your blue

      by luring clouds to linger,

but you are always here.

 

You are what I see,

you make me think to raise my eyes,

and I do.

 

June 29, 2024

Inspired by Mike Franklyn

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Book review: Thieves in the Night

Arthur Koestler’s story of Galilee, before Israel…

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Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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“Life is wide.”

“Life is wide.”

A lesson for mornings…

 

 

“Life is wide. There’s room to take a new run at it.”

 

Ivan Doig (1939-2015)

American novelist

 

Our country is suffering in these parlous times. Optimism isn’t the first thing I think of when I wake each morning.

Nevertheless, this epigram from Ivan Doig is a lesson.

I’m going to keep working hard at taking a new run at life.

The track is wide, indeed.

There’s room to do some good things.

 

By the way, it’s a good bet you’ll like everything by Ivan Doig. My favorite is This House of Sky, his memoir of growing up in Montana. The Bartender’s Tale is really good, too.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

Home Team: Poems About Baseball (book review)

Edwin Romond hits another homer…

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

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that rhyming thing…

that rhyming thing…

orange you going to read this?

 

 

Someone said, “Nothing rhymes with orange.” 

I said, “No, it doesn’t.

 

Take your time with this one.

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For a change of pace,

read this book review

of one woman’s desperate childhood,

The Homeplace by Marilyn Nelson

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As with another eye: Poems of exactitude with 55 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

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Can cats talk?..“Cat talk,” my poem

Can cats talk?..“Cat talk,” my poem

talking to the animals…

 

 

Cat talk

 

She’s doing her cat thing,

nothing better to do.

Maybe that’s true,

but she won’t say it’s so,

 

she won’t budge,

and she won’t hunch a shoulder

   in that warm spot,

and she won’t blink a yes or no

   when you ask

      the simplest thing,

or tilt her head

   when you say hello,

 

she keeps her peace,

she stares as you bend down

   to stroke her head,

she waits while you think about

   leaving her alone,

 

maybe she can talk,

but doesn’t want to.

 

July 9, 2024

inspired by “Undercover Agent,” a painting by Jan Byrne

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Book review: The Comanche Empire

the other story of the American West…

by Pekka Hämäläinen

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Above all: Poems of dawn and more with 73 free verse poems,

and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)

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“…stoked again by antique thunders…”

“…stoked again by antique thunders…”

…it soaked the upright apes…

 

I’m intrigued by the poetic adventure of ascribing human attributes to things in the natural world.

 

That afternoon, there was a potent storm.

I imagined that many of those big fat raindrops had pounded the old driveway many times over the years—

you know, rain comes down, and water evaporates up…

Maybe raindrops have favorite places…

 

It looks like rain

 

With ancient fury, the rain comes,

stoked again by antique thunders,

kindled again by strokes

   that sear the sagging sky.

 

Old Zeus once stirred this brawl

   of sound and spark

   and wind and wet,

he little knew his power

   to brew eternal cycles

   of Sturm und Drang.

 

This is the same descent of rain

   that soaked the upright apes,

and the pharaohs,

and the Thracian warriors,

and the Goths, the Viking raiders,

the samurai, the Chiricahua children,

the hardy gauchos,

the slaves in every time,

and the beans of every summer.

 

This rain has filled this air before,

these heavy drops

   have always done such drenching,

they know their way to earth,

they know just what to do.

 

July 8, 2016

My poem “It looks like rain” was published in my second collection of 47 new free verse and haiku poems, Seeing far: Selected poems. You can buy it on Amazon (paperback and Kindle), or get it free in Kindle Unlimited, click here

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Book review: Forced Founders

by Woody Holton

The so-called “Founding Fathers”

weren’t the only ones

who helped to shape our independence…

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In other words: Poems for your eyes and ears with 64 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

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