“…to expose a thought entire…”…  “Cipher,” my poem

“…to expose a thought entire…”…  “Cipher,” my poem

our secret…

 

 

Cipher

 

I cannot choose the words.

I feel a pressure, desire,

to expose a thought entire.

It will not reveal itself,

nor change to parts.

It stays hidden, whole,

startling by degrees,

urgent in its fullness,

as I begin to understand.

It is my thought.

It is me, only me.

I tell you this, only you,

because you can understand.

 

June 26, 1995

Bethany Beach, DE

for Barb, my dearest one

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: The Proud Tower

…a lot more than a history book…

by Barbara Tuchman

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Are you Punch or Judy?

Are you Punch or Judy?

don’t be the show…

 

 

“Listen and connect with people,

      don’t perform for them.”

 

from The Daily Stoic by Ryan Holiday and Stephen Hanselman

New York: Portfolio/Penguin, 2016

p. 76

 

Would your friends rather talk with you or watch Punch & Judy?

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Home Team: Poems About Baseball (book review)

Edwin Romond hits another homer…

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
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the other you…”Looky here,” my poem

the other you…”Looky here,” my poem

the ugly bears…

 

 

Looky here

 

I didn’t mean to look at me.

I guess I wasn’t really having that much fun

   in the Fun House.

What was I thinking when I ate cotton candy

   as a kid and thought it was great?

The stuffed animals aren’t really cute…

   where do they buy the ugly bears?

I was alone, I guess that says a lot…

   who walks around alone in the Fun House?

 

Anyway, I passed the goofy, wavy mirror

   and I guess I couldn’t help it,

I looked at it quick, I didn’t really stop,

I saw me, shattered, in layers, quivery,

even if I’d had a smile on my face

   I’m not sure smiles show up in those things.

I kept walking, and I was thinking

   about what I really look like,

and I guess I realized a mirror

   probably never tells the whole story,

because the other you might have

   a different point of view.

 

May 28, 2018

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Book review: The Myths of Tet

How people get killed by lies…

by Edwin E. Moïse

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T. S. Eliot and “the hollow men”

T. S. Eliot and “the hollow men”

a bloomin’ wasteland, maybe…

 

Thomas Stearns Eliot (1888-1965)

American-British writer, popularly acclaimed as a great poet of the 20th century

 

At long last, I’ve tried T. S. Eliot’s poetry.

Maybe I’ll put Collected Poems of T. S. Eliot back on the shelf, and try again after a while.

Maybe not.

 

“…We are the hollow men

   We are the stuffed men…”

From “The Hollow Men,” 1925, by T. S. Eliot

 

It’s not that I mind Eliot’s deliberate contradictions so much. I’m willing to be provoked. I’m open to being tantalized. I’m ready to be pushed or pulled outside my comfort zone.

The sticky point for me, with Eliot’s poetry, is that I never seem to get to the point, or maybe I simply don’t get the point. When I get to the end of one of his longish poems, I’m really not sure where I started, or where I wandered, or where I arrived.

I find little coherence in Eliot’s words and phrases and passages.

I think of myself as a wordsmith, and I love the beauty of elegant phrases and shimmering, specific, steely, selective, stately, splendid words that tell a delicious story or evoke a bloom of emotion.

For my taste, T. S. Eliot’s poetry isn’t tasty, and it’s a bloomin’ wasteland of jumbled words, fractured images, and unfinished imaginations.

If you’re wondering where all the flowers have gone, don’t look for answers in Eliot’s work.

Source: T. S. Eliot, Collected Poems of T. S. Eliot (New York: Harcourt, Brace & Company, 1958), 101.

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Fire in the Lake (book review)

you should have read it in 1972…

by Frances FitzGerald

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a black southerner said…

a black southerner said…

getting closer…

 

 

“Years ago, a black southerner told me that in the South,

whites do not care how close blacks get

   as long as they do not get too high,

but in the North, she said,

whites do not care how high blacks get

   as long as they do not get too close.”

 

from:

The Other Madisons: The Lost History of a President’s Black Family

by Bettye Kearse

Boston, MA: Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, 2020

p. 72

 

Think about it—how much of this statement do you think is wrong?

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Book review: Ethan Frome

they were not satisfied with less…

by Edith Wharton

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“the wall entire…”…“Wall,” my poem

“the wall entire…”…“Wall,” my poem

there is more…

 

 

Wall

 

The wall stands high,

it has nowhere to go,

it heeds no future,

and it will not speak the past,

 

its dirty stones are mute,

they’re strong,

but they merely make the wall,

each alone is naught,

 

the wall entire is a simple part

   of a simple world

      that blocks my path,

and flaunts the other ways

   that make a turn to left or right,

 

each an adventure,

more imagining,

a few steps

   to futures in the beyond.

 

January 1, 2024

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

Above all: Poems of dawn and more with 73 free verse poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

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