“…the hollow men…” and so on

“…the hollow men…” and so on

I’m open to being tantalized…

 


“We are the hollow men

  We are the stuffed men”

 

from “The Hollow Men,” 1925, by T. S. Eliot

Thomas Stearns Eliot (1888-1965)

American-British writer, popularly acclaimed as a great poet of the 20th century

 

At long last, I’ve tried T. S. Eliot’s poetry.

I respectfully think that T. S. Eliot’s poetry is a bloomin’ wasteland…

Maybe I’ll put Collected Poems of T. S. Eliot back on the shelf, and try again after a while.

Maybe not.

It’s not that I mind Eliot’s deliberate contradictions so much. I’m willing to be provoked. I’m open to being tantalized. I’m ready to be pushed or pulled outside my comfort zone.

The sticky point for me, with Eliot’s poetry, is that I never seem to get to the point, or maybe I simply don’t get the point. When I get to the end of one of his longish poems, I’m really not sure where I started, or where I wandered, or where I arrived. 

I find little coherence in Eliot’s words and phrases and passages.

I think of myself as a wordsmith, and I love the beauty of elegant phrases and shimmering, specific, steely, selective, stately, splendid words that tell a delicious story or evoke a bloom of emotion.

For my taste, T. S. Eliot’s poetry isn’t tasty, and it’s a bloomin’ wasteland of jumbled words, fractured images, and unfinished imaginations. 

If you’re wondering where all the flowers have gone, don’t look for answers in Eliot’s work.

 

Source: T. S. Eliot, Collected Poems of T. S. Eliot (New York: Harcourt, Brace & Company, 1958), 101.

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“Fishering,” by Brian Doyle

…what meets the eye…

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getting started, a big thing…my poem

getting started, a big thing…my poem

we did it…

 

 

once…

 

We did a big thing.

 

We got dressed up,

invited family and friends,

said the words,

traded rings,

danced at the party,

drank the champagne,

stood for the picture,

rolled away in the car…

 

we started our lives together.

 

September 28, 2025

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Book review: The Snow Goose

…sensual drama, eminently poetic…

by Paul Gallico

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Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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The Fugitive…movie review

The Fugitive…movie review

a really good story…

 

 

Movie review:

The Fugitive

 

The fugitive is Dr. Richard Kimble (vigorously played by Harrison Ford), unjustly accused of murdering his wife and on the run from the police while he searches for the one-armed man who actually did the deed.

The Fugitive (1993, rated PG-13, 130 minutes) is a rip-roaring story with what I dare to claim is the most thrilling, scary, truly realistic train wreck sequence ever brought to the silver screen.

The Fugitive is a two-man show: an all-American guy aiming to prove his innocence and a passion-less cop who’s trying to track him down.

During the film, U.S. Deputy Marshall Sam Gerard (played by Tommy Lee Jones, he won an Oscar for Best Supporting Actor) transforms himself from a relentlessly heartless good-guy to a good good-guy.

Perhaps you remember the top-rated mostly B&W television series “The Fugitive” (1963-1967) starring David Janssen. The 1993 movie is great proof that you can tell a really good story in less than 120 episodes.

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Book review: Mila 18

horrific truth by Leon Uris

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The Book of Days…part lxii

The Book of Days…part lxii

The Book of Days

 

The dawn’s early light can be pleasure enough for the whole day.

There are words enough to tell the story of “the temptation of day to come.”

It is my delight to write some of them for your delectation.

 

 

to come

 

The star of day

   troubles low clouds

      in the earliest dawning,

there is none of day,

the horizon a muddle,

the faint light

   pushes the high dark,

a promise strains in the vault.

 

November 16, 2025

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Book review: The Sea Runners

…it informs, it does not soar…

by Ivan Doig

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1491 by Charles Mann…book review

1491 by Charles Mann…book review

guns and germs…

 

 

Book review:

1491: New Revelations of the Americas Before Columbus

 

by Charles Mann

New York: Vintage Books, 2011

553 pages

 

Everything you never knew about civilized people in the Americas before the Europeans arrived and killed most of them (OK, many died in battle, but it was European diseases, mostly). Maybe close to 100 million “native” people died within 100 years or so of the “discovery” by Columbus…but hold on, this book is not about Wounded Knee-type criticism or ex post facto self-flagellation.

In 1491, Mann beautifully describes the marvelous sophistication of cultures, cities, agriculture, arts and science that blossomed in North America, Central America, and South America thousands of years ago, in many cases predating achievements and growth and civilization in Europe. Yes, the Incas never used the wheel except for children’s toys. And yes, the Mississippian city of Cahokia was a bustling port and a trading center with population equal to Paris in France—and that was 500 years before Columbus sailed.

And yes, there were grand cities (e.g., Cahokia) in the Americas before there was pyramid-building in Egypt. And yes, the Olmec culture in what is now Mexico invented the zero whole centuries before mathematicians in India did the same.

My recollection of schoolboy learning about the history of the Americas is that the dates and events were tied to discovery and conquest and colonization by Europeans. The implication was that, before the white men with guns, germs, and steel arrived, nothing much was going on in whole continents characterized more by “virgin land” and “endless wilderness” than by people who had agriculture, city life, art, trade, commerce, religion, science, kings, and philosophers.

Mann offers 1491: New Revelations of the Americas Before Columbus. For me, the joy of reading this book is learning about the multiplicity of cultures that flourished in the Americas, and learning how they tamed and managed and very greenly conserved their environment…and for me, the sad revelation of this book is understanding that the peoples of the Americas were human beings whose achievements were noble and notable, and yet, lamentably, their cultural legacies are largely lost and the losses are barely mourned.

In 1533 Pizarro and his conquistadors at Cuzco precipitated the decline of the 300-year-old Inca empire in Peru. Fifty years later, the Spanish colonial administrators in Peru ordered the burning of all the Incan “khipu” knotted string records because they were “idolatrous objects.” Khipu were the Incas’ only form of writing. The smoke from the burning of their books gets in your eyes, forever and ever.

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Book review: Shantung Compound

They didn’t care much

        about each other…

by Langdon Gilkey

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