singing the easy tunes…“la cage,” my poem

singing the easy tunes…“la cage,” my poem

I’ve seen other creatures…

 

 

la cage

 

I could be wrong,

I think I’m a bird.

 

It’s hard to put it into words

   ‘cause I can’t talk

      in exactly the way

         the big creature does.

 

The creature can’t sing, of course,

I’ve sung the easy tunes

   so many times,

but all I hear from the creature

   is “la la la”

      and “mmmh mmmh,”

without a speck of joy.

 

The creature gives me food,

although the seeds are really old

   and the bugs are already dead!

and nectar?

oh well, I’ll keep waiting…

 

The hairy thing that barks

   doesn’t jump up any more,

I stopped being scared.

It’s a good thing I’m up so high!

 

I did get to fly once

   when the creature

      forgot to shut the little door,

but I didn’t go far,

my little arms got tired,

then I moved around three times

   and then the creature grabbed me—

it didn’t hurt—

and now I’m back inside.

 

I can see through the wall,

the sun is sometimes bright,

the sticks with greenish things

   go up and down,

and back and forth,

I’ve seen other creatures

   that sort of look like me,

I heard one sing my song.

 

A while ago, when it was dark

   I think I had a thought…

I’m sitting here… 

I can’t remember it.

 

December 7, 2024

“la cage” was inspired by “A Caged Bird” by Sarah Orne Jewett (1849-1909)

excerpt:

“High at the window in her cage

    The old canary flits and sings,

  Nor sees across the curtain pass

     The shadow of a swallow’s wings.”

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: Shantung Compound

They didn’t care so much

   about each other…

by Langdon Gilkey

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In other words: Poems for your eyes and ears with 64 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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American Poetry: The Nineteenth Century…book review

American Poetry: The Nineteenth Century…book review

there’s more than structure involved…

 

 

Book review:

American Poetry: The Nineteenth Century

 

Vols. 1 and 2

New York: The Library of America, 1993

Vol. 1 – 1,099 pages

Vol. 2 – 1,049 pages

 

What can I say?

In general, the poetry of bygone centuries is uninteresting to me.

The poets were convinced that structure was overwhelmingly important, or, perhaps, their readers were convinced that structure was overwhelmingly important, or, perhaps, both.

The word “relentless” comes to my mind. It’s difficult for me to read much of this work—silently or aloud—without bobbing my head, saying the emphasized syllables with increasing vigor and noise, and moving my body to match the all-too-obvious, often drum beat rhythms.

It seems to me that these poets think that the conjunction of selected words is of secondary or tertiary concern, whereas I believe it should be the overriding expression of the poetic arts.

The millions in the past disagreed. So be it.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Forget about Buffy the Vampire Slayer

Dracula is a scary book, really…

by Bram Stoker

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
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“before it’s light…”…my poem

“before it’s light…”…my poem

one more round…

 

 

before it’s light…

 

It’s not quite day,

and I haven’t completely

   shrugged sleep from my thoughts,

 

I’m thinking this is the short time,

this is “get started” time,

this is the gossamer moment

   for pulling on the bright shirt

      and welcoming one more day,

one more morning,

one more round of life,

one more chance

   to get it mostly right,

 

I’m thinking nothing new here,

just like yesterday,

do good things,

get ready for tomorrow.

 

October 2, 2024

 

…waiting for breakfast at Easter’s Country Kitchen, Hingham, MA

 

Published in Creative Inspirations, Jan-Feb 2025 issue

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Book review: Hag-Seed

by Margaret Atwood…it ain’t Shakespeare

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
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and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

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No Constitutional Right to be Ladies…book review

No Constitutional Right to be Ladies…book review

what’s right is right…

 

 

Book review:

No Constitutional Right to be Ladies:

Women and the Obligations of Citizenship

 

by Linda K. Kerber (b1940)

New York: Hill and Wang, a division of Farrar, Strauss and Giroux, 1998

405 pages

 

Kerber, a well-respected historian, makes what should be an obvious point: women are citizens, just like men, and they should share all the rights and obligations of citizenship.

She disputes, in compelling detail, that women have a constitutional right “to be ladies” when that is conceived as separating them from a complete status as functioning citizens who are the constitutional equals of men (even the ones they’ve married!).

It’s not a “feminist” thing or a “suffrage” thing. It’s a matter-of-fact thing—nothing about it doesn’t make sense.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Oops, Columbus didn’t “discover” America

…but he did get close…

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
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and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

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Natural Life with No Parole…book review

Natural Life with No Parole…book review

writing ingenuous truth…

 

 

Book review:

Natural Life with No Parole

 

by Sarah Rossiter

Georgetown, KY: Finishing Line Press, 2016

 

Rossiter’s poetry is worth a second read.

I think her word choices and line breaks are a bit disorganized, but nevertheless coherent.

Natural Life with No Parole is about what she sees and hears and feels, with genuine verve and ingenuous truth about the reality of human emotions.

She finds it natural to say things like “…That’s all there was, it wasn’t much, but joy is like that.”

Let the flavor of that line wrap around your tongue.

 

Quoted line is from “Woman in a White Truck, Driving”

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Book review: The Snow Goose

…sensual drama, eminently poetic…

by Paul Gallico

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My first name was rain: A dreamery of poems with 53 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

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John Adams…book review

…John Adams,

        in the thick of it…

 

 

Book review:

John Adams

 

by David McCullough (1933-2022)

Simon & Schuster, New York, 2001

751 pages

 

Maybe you’re like me. Maybe you don’t think biography is the best way to do history. David McCullough’s Pulitzer Prize-winner is a reason to change your mind a bit.

John Adams, simply, is a really good book. McCullough helps you to warm up to this American icon and to his personal experience in leading the American Revolution and the first formative years of the American republic.

Adams, our first vice president and second president, was among the few who were in the thick of it from the beginning, and he never shrank from doing what he expansively viewed as his duty to his new country.

McCullough’s prose is a delightful experience for the serious historian and for the armchair dabbler who likes a good read. From cover to cover, John Adams is a lush, genuine presentation of a man, his loved ones, his career, his commitment to do good works and his never-flagging appreciation that the object of government should be to do the people’s business and make possible

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

My first name was rain: A dreamery of poems with 53 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

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