“the mossty boys all wore a hat”…my poem

“the mossty boys all wore a hat”…my poem

the boolies mimed…

 

 

ronday vue

 

It was time for a furling gat,

the mossty boys all wore a hat,

they rumbled when the clepsys chimed,

they crumbled when the boolies mimed,

and on their way they ratlinged fine

   and mortled as they kept in line.

 

The mook they made was loud and blam,

the dancing was appoint, and skram,

chandilling as they jamped each step,

so trilling as they klamped each rep,

their ronday lasted all the night,

at morning they were flamp and skite.

 

October 22, 2024

 

I’m learning from my friend Mike…

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How does a poem end?

Finis,” my thoughts (my poem)

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“Speak like rain.” Isak Dinesen’s story

“Speak like rain.” Isak Dinesen’s story

poetry can be rain…

 

“One evening in the maize-field…to amuse myself,

I spoke to the field laborers, who were mostly quite young,

in Swaheli [sic] verse. There was no sense in the verse,

it was made for the sake of rhyme…

They were quick to understand that the meaning of poetry

   is of no consequence,

      and they did not question the thesis of the verse,

but waited eagerly for the rhyme, and laughed at it when it came….

As they had become used to the idea of poetry, they begged:

‘Speak again. Speak like rain.’ ”

 

quote from Out of Africa, pp. 285-286

 

Isak Dinesen (Karen Blixen) (1885-1962)

New York: The Modern Library, 1937, 1992

399 pages

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Moby-Dick and stuff…book talk

Moby-Dick and stuff…book talk

Moby-Dick and stuff….

 

 

I know whale tales aren’t for everyone.

If you’re still with me, you might be interested to know that Herman Melville’s iconic whale story was published 174 years ago (titled: “The Whale”) in London, and then, a month later, in New York.

The original American title is Moby-Dick; or, The Whale. Melville actually went to sea as a crewman on a whaling vessel, and based his novel in part on a real sperm whale named Mocha Dick, known to South Pacific sailors in the 1840s.

Early in his career Melville was briefly acclaimed for some of his South Pacific stories, such as Typee, but he was obscure during the last 30 years of his life. He earned only $1,200 or so from the sale of about 3,200 copies of Moby-Dick, which was out of print when he died in 1891.

A first American edition of the book can easily be secured if you have about $80,000 (free shipping!) to spend.

Melville wrote in a variety of genres—again, not for all tastes. I’m a big fan of Moby-Dick, and I’m also an advocate for Bartleby, the Scrivener: A Story of Wall Street. Nothing of the South Pacific here. The circumstances of this desiccated short story are curious, even eccentric, incredulous. The withered and aloof Bartleby is presented, examined and disdained, until his very dispirited isolation makes him the object of the narrator’s genuine but increasingly troubled caretaking.

Don’t overlook Billy Budd, Sailor. It’s a searing morality play.

 

You may be surprised to know that Melville also wrote poetry. One critic has somewhat ponderously suggested that Moby-Dick is filled with Melville’s incipient poetry. I certainly believe that a story can contain a poem, but I don’t see anything like that in Moby-Dick.

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The “dime novels” in the Civil War

Think “blood-and-thunder”…

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Winesburg, Ohio…book review

Winesburg, Ohio…book review

humanity surging…

 

 

Book review:

Winesburg, Ohio

 

by Sherwood Anderson (1876-1941)

Simon & Brown, 1919, 2012

208 pages

 

The reader of Winesburg, Ohio (1919) is tempted to think of Edgar Lee Masters’ Spoon River Anthology (1915), but the reader should resist the temptation.

There is very little of society in Spoon River, and so much of society in each of Anderson’s short stories. The humanity surges in these stories, and they touch so many memories of being with other people and making life happen.

At the end of each story—“Nobody knows,” “The untold lie,” and the list goes on—the reader wonders:

     is there more?

     is there more to know?

     is there more truth?

It’s easy to put this book down, and it’s easier to pick it up again.

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Book review: The Proud Tower

…a lot more than a history book…

by Barbara Tuchman

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The Book of Days…part xlix

The Book of Days…part xlix

The Book of Days

 

The dawn’s early light can be pleasure enough for the whole day.

There are words enough to tell the story of “the temptation of day to come.”

It is my delight to write some of them for your delectation.

 

 

a tasting

 

…the second look is the keeper.

 

The clouds are shifting shapes,

moving quickly

   across the new morning sky,

the smudge and fold of flannel,

becoming flan,

nudging the smear

   of cream sauce,

filling the sky

   with hasty pudding

      and the like,

making a menu

   that lasts mere moments…

 

January 4, 2025

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Book review: To Serve Them All My Days

by R. F. Delderfield

A beloved teacher,

      you know this story…

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a noisy monster…“It was red,” my poem

a noisy monster…“It was red,” my poem

the horses lost their jobs

 

 

It was red

 

What’s left are the last thin hunks

   of that heroic red machine,

planted in the front field,

not going anywhere,

still pointed to its last destination.

 

This is a marvel of machine,

a completely rusted spectacle of progress,

form invites quick memories

   of function…

 

It doesn’t tempt the kids,

there are no pedals to push,

the big seat is too high

   and it’s too rough for bouncing,

and it’s too far from the thick rusty wheel

   with no horn,

the big rugged tractor tires

   turned one last time

      when the moon and the stars

         and the sun were younger.

 

Once it was a noisy monster,

the farmer called the thing “Bab,”

it scared the horses who lost their jobs,

it scattered the goats and the hens,

the pigs went rooting

   on the other side of the barn.

 

Old farmers remember their first ride

   on their magic new machines

      that chugged everywhere, pulled anything,

each tractor needed its own tool box,

half metal stuff, half mystery stuff,

and the farmers knew

   how to keep them going,

and they knew the secret kick

   that finished many repair jobs.

 

This rig’s driver never used

   a couple of the rods

      and a few of the knobby connectors,

and he never wondered

   why he didn’t know

      what they were for.

 

The spectral farmer in baggy overalls

   who starts to fill the tank each night

      always struggles with the cap,

and always decides to wait…

 

October 27, 2024

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Book review: Shakespeare’s Wife

Germaine Greer just went overboard a bit…

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