“…one clean, bursting, raptured ideal…”…my poem

“…one clean, bursting, raptured ideal…”…my poem

The pushing, potent, heaving…

 

 

Poesy

 

This is, nearly, what it’s like.

 

Magma flowing cool, I think,

is nearly right,

the swelling flow,

quite nearly right.

 

The pushing, potent,

familiar overflowing burden,

is quite nearly truly right.

 

The heaving rush in one clean moment,

of one clean, bursting, raptured ideal,

it speaks the straining gush of simple words

   that stream around and through,

cool fire sparking

   as they merge and touch

      and match and lodge together.

 

This is nearly, quite truly,

nearly certain,

quite nearly right.

 

April 3, 1996

Sanibel Island, Florida

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How does a poem end?

Finis,” my thoughts (my poem)

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“…downbeat for the dawn…”…”Overture,” my poem

“…downbeat for the dawn…”…”Overture,” my poem

a kind of music of the spheres…

 

 

Overture

 

I stood awhile in prescient dark,

faint sounds of night

   were near and far,

a rustling song,

a sylvan chord,

a tiny thrum,

and more—

 

a downbeat for the dawn to come,

scant chorus rising,

I whispered hallowed words

   to make a coda,

and waited for the star of day.

 

January 21, 2023

Inspired by “Behind Stowe” (1927) by Elizabeth Bishop (1911-1979)

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A poem about the right thing

…and the lesser incarnation…

“Vanity”

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any time is good for unwrapping…(my poem)

any time is good for unwrapping…(my poem)

giving is all…

 

 

Santa’s helpers

 

Bows and ribbons all around,

we’re on the floor

   wrapping in the dark hours,

and we unwrap our hearts

   and share great gifts,

again and again.

 

December 25, 2022

 

Delightfully inspired by “Every Christmas Eve” by Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer, December 25, 2022, on her website, www.ahundredfallingveils.com

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Book review: “Bartleby, the Scrivener”

Think about loneliness beyond understanding…

by Herman Melville

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“The wayward sun…the pallid star…”…my poem

“The wayward sun…the pallid star…”…my poem

scant promise of high noon

 

 

“…partly sunny…”

 

The wayward sun can do no more

   than linger at the entrance to the day.

 

There is no rush to dawn,

no vaulting ray to chase

   the shadows of the night…

 

…and later, in the guise of day,

the pallid star is cloud-cloaked, cool,

it drifts to mid-sky,

gives only scant promise of high noon.

 

June 27, 2018

My poem “…partly sunny…” was published in my fifth collection of 53 poems, My first name was rain: A dreamery of poems. You can buy it on Amazon (paperback and Kindle), or get it free in Kindle Unlimited (search for “Richard Carl Subber”).

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“…fragmentary blue…”

a hue for you, thanks, Bob

Robert Frost, old reliable

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“I forgot to get a card…”…a love poem

“I forgot to get a card…”…a love poem

a short time to be in love…

 

 

I forgot to get a card…

 

It’s not about the candles and the cake,

it’s not about singing

   the same old song anymore,

it’s not about the date anymore,

not an event,

not a stopping place—

it’s another reminder that a year

   is a long time to live,

and a short time to be in love,

it’s a marker on the trail,

and the trail is rising,

and the mountains are behind us,

and the oceans, yes, and many mysteries…

 

Just ahead, the path turns again, as always,

and we do not see much of the morrow,

and naught of the waiting tomorrows,

but we see the coming of our latter days,

and we can sing yesterday’s songs

   at each new dawn,

and sing them again and again and again,

and add new words at each new sunset…

 

May 8, 2017

I confess, I didn’t forget to get a card—I couldn’t find a card that I wanted to give. You can guess whose birthday I was celebrating. I decided to write a birthday poem that doesn’t actually mention “birthday” and skips all the smarmy stuff and doesn’t bother with the “you’re only as old as you feel” stuff and the “omigawd, how many candles are on your cake?” stuff. A birthday is a day in our lives. We celebrated our lives together. Every day.

My poem “I forgot to get a card…” was published in my fifth collection of 53 poems, My first name was rain: A dreamery of poems. You can buy it on Amazon (paperback and Kindle), or get it free in Kindle Unlimited (search for “Richard Carl Subber”).

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A poet is a “maker”

…and it doesn’t have to rhyme…

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a tree for Becky…”A man’s job,” my poem

doing the right thing is easy… 

 

 

A man’s job

 

I won’t sell my trees.

The balsams would go quickly

   at “cut your own” prices,

but I tell my neighbors, again this year,

there will be no cutting

   on this old slope that spills down

      to my little barn.

 

Day is darkening,

and I move among my trees.

This one, bent and broken

   in last winter’s snows,

has grown,

the birds of spring may nest

   in its green spaces…

 

and now, from below,

the boy climbs to me, his head down,

his father’s axe in hand,

he has changed since his father died,

he tries to do a man’s work,

he will have little time

   for baseball with the other boys.

“I told Momma I would find a tree,

to make a Christmas for Becky and the baby.”

 

So.

He holds his axe in both hands,

and he stands straight in my field.

I extend my arm.

“Go find a good one,

I can help you carry it home.”

 

December 1, 2018

My poem “A man’s job” was published in my third collection of 64 poems, In other words: Poems for your eyes and ears. You can buy it on Amazon (paperback and Kindle), or get it free in Kindle Unlimited, click here

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“…and dipped in folly…”

only Poe knows how to say it…

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