not just cookies…my poem

not just cookies…my poem

the crumbs beckon…

 

 

not just cookies…

 

Don’t reach for the last one,

not yet,

let the full taste linger,

let the crunch

   become a munch,

let the crumbs beckon,

lick your fingers

   one last time,

then go ahead.

Do it.

Eat the last macaroon.

Say “thank you!”

   right out loud,

let everyone hear it!

 

May 25, 2025

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Book review: An Empire on the Edge

by Nick Bunker

The British wanted to win

       the Revolutionary War,

    but they had good reasons

        for not trying too hard…

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Good Poems: American Places…book review

Good Poems: American Places…book review

Check out May Sarton’s poems

 

 

Book review:

Good Poems: American Places

 

Garrison Keillor (b1942), ed.

New York: Viking, 2011

484 pages

 

Keillor is no slouch when it comes to picking readable poems, I give him full credit for that.

However, there are so many poems here that this volume isn’t selective in any meaningful way.

Good Poems: American Places has themed sections that are obviously different but the topics aren’t obviously useful.

Is there something for everyone here?

Does anyone really care?

I found a few gems: for example, poems by Tom Hennen and May Sarton.

‘Nuff said.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

How does a poem end?

“Finis,” my thoughts (my poem)

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Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,
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“Darkness begs for light…”…“View,” my poem

“Darkness begs for light…”…“View,” my poem

children show the way…

 

 

View

 

Darkness begs for light.

 

The shaded bower does not fight

   the sun’s traverse,

the first bright ray

   that heralds day…

 

The night embraces all its dark,

at dusk the light well knows

   to fade,

faint stars are meagre,

creatures huddle

   to protect their own,

endings seem to come to fore,

but dawn begins

   to make its way…

 

Great shadows linger

   in the barn’s high reach,

the hay is mounded,

making dark spaces

   where no one goes,

making the hiding spots

   that no one knows,

 

and yet the children

   climb old ladders,

and flounce the hay and shout

   and guard their lantern

      in the shadows,

and heed the lure of dark,

and make some day

   as they make their lark…

 

May 29, 2025

inspired by “…to make sunshine in a shady place.”  from The Sketches of Louisa May Alcott, by Louisa May Alcott, New York: Ironweed Press, Inc., 2001, 282 pages, p. 250

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Traveling Light…book review

Traveling Light…book review

…of pears and bears…

 

Book review:

Traveling Light: Collected and New Poems

 

by David Russell Wagoner (1926-2021)

A prolific American writer, poet, novelist

 

It’s a pleasure to recommend Traveling Light. Wagoner has some heavy duty poetry chops.

Any serious poet can learn from his examples. Repeatedly, as I read through Traveling Light, I wanted to pick up my pen and grab a piece of paper and try my hand at writing the images he sees.

Readers, dig in! Wagoner finds the right words for those feelings, those realities that you didn’t imagine before you read his intuitions…

 

…such as, feeding a whole sack of fresh pears to a camel in the zoo:

“…She watched me disappear,

Then with a rippling trudge went back to her stable

To snort, to browse on hay, to remember my sack forever.

She’d been used to having no pears, but hadn’t known it…”

 

…such as, on meeting a bear in the bear’s own woods:

“…Withdraw without turning and start saying

Softly, monotonously, whatever comes to mind

Without special pleading:

Nothing hurt or reproachful to appeal to his better feelings.

He has none, only a harder life than yours…”

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The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie…book review

The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie…book review

prime times of life…

 

 

Book review:

The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie

 

by Muriel Spark (1918-2006)

New York: Harper Perennial, 1961, 1994

187 pages

 

Miss Jean Brodie, an exceedingly unconventional teacher, described every part of her life and her commitments and her outlook as being “in my prime,” but it is a hallmark of Muriel Spark’s magnificent talent in assembling the best words that it is left to the reader to completely imagine what “prime” may mean.

The defining value of the novel is the unceasing willingness and undaunted desire of Brodie’s carefully chosen students—the girls in the “Brodie set”—to try to figure out what “prime” means and to try to understand the effects their teacher is having on them.

The pages are filled with interactions and misunderstandings and hormonal energies. Miss Brodie and the other grownups dramatically pursue their teaching roles, but the girls largely find their own ways to learn things and work at growing up while doing so.

The book ends but the story doesn’t end. Henry Adams said a teacher can never tell “where (her) influence stops.” The ultimately humiliated Miss Brodie dies, but her prime has no boundaries and her students make their own lives.

 

p.s. the acclaimed movie with the same name and Maggie Smith as Miss Brodie is first class entertainment, but it mostly ignores Muriel Spark’s grimly realistic portrayal of the life forces that animate the “Brodie set.”

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Book review: The Proud Tower

…a lot more than a history book…

by Barbara Tuchman

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the TV screen won’t stop talking…my poem

the TV screen won’t stop talking…my poem

you know what to do…

 

point and squeeze

 

Shoot me if I start watching TV again.

 

I don’t want to be

   like the old lady in the wheelchair

      who turns, with some visible pain,

to gaze at the TV screen as she’s pushed past it.

 

I don’t want to be

   like the old guy in the fitness room

      who sits on his exercise chair

         and looks up, fixated with mouth agape,

at the TV screen that won’t stop talking.

 

I don’t want to be

   like the people in the waiting room

      who can’t stop looking

         at the TV screen

            with the sound turned down.

 

Keep an eye on me—you know what to do.

 

May 14, 2025

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The Scarlet Letter, victim of Hollywood

Nathaniel Hawthorne’s version is best

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