“faintest breaths…”…“another thing,” my poem

“faintest breaths…”…“another thing,” my poem

what’s it all about?

 

 

another thing

 

j’ever notice

that they never look up

to look at the phone?

 

head tilted down,

the obvious sign,

body still,

thumbs awhirl,

faintest breaths…

 

how often have you seen

  someone pumping a fist

    and shouting “yeah!”

      after scrolling down

        one more time?

 

Try talking to that guy

  in the waiting room

    who hasn’t looked up

      from his phone

        since he sat down…

 

think about being him…

it won’t take long.

 

May 9, 2024

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

1491 by Charles Mann (book review)

…lost American legacies

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“a dancing wight”…“Another time,” my poem

“a dancing wight”…“Another time,” my poem

a chime in the dark

 

 

Another time

 

That single chime,

sometime in night,

there is no rhyme,

try as I might

   I cannot conjure

      a dancing wight

         who sings that tune,

no song sublime,

no twist of rune

   that I can write.

 

I let the chime expire,

I savor it entire,

perhaps Great Pan

   may favor it

      to puff his pipes,

and thrill the mime

   in pagan rite,

in distant time.

 

May 8, 2024

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Book review: An Empire Divided

King George and his ministers

wanted the Caribbean sugar islands

more than they wanted the 13 colonies…

by Andrew Jackson O’Shaughnessy

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The Eye of the Story…book review

The Eye of the Story…book review

“Each work is new.”

 

 

Book review:

The Eye of the Story: Selected Essays and Reviews

 

by Eudora Alice Welty (1909-2001)

American short story writer and novelist, Pulitzer Prize winner

New York: Random House, 1977

355 pages

 

The Eye of the Story is lush, literate, filled with almost languid richness.

I can only imagine being so well read that I could recognize all of her references to other writers and the vast literature of novels and short stories. I envy the breadth of her engagement with the world of fiction.

I’m more interested in what she has to say about writing.

“We who encounter words used in certain ways are persuaded by them to be brought mind and heart within the presence, the power, of the imagination” (p. 134).

“Each work is new” (p. 135). Welty is talking about novels, but this also is true, so true, of poetry. She observes that, in the fiction of her contemplation, “words have been found for which there may be no other words” (p. 137).

“The imagination has to be involved, and more—ignited. How much brighter than the symbol can be the explicit observation that springs firsthand from deep and present feeling…” (p. 139).

“It is through the shaping of the work in the hands of the artist that you most nearly come to know what can be known, on the page, of his mind and heart, and his as apart from the others. No other saw life in an ordering exactly like this” (p. 144).

I find affirmation in The Eye of the Story. Welty declares that writing is an art that uses the literally infinite array of words in sequence to create a spectacular, unique exhibition of what’s in the writer’s mind and in her heart.

“Each work is new.” I believe that each poem is unique. Each engaged reader takes a new step on new ground each time he reads the poem.

The poet opens a new window in her mind each time she takes the quill in hand.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

A poem about the right thing

…and the lesser incarnation…

“Vanity”

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In other words: Poems for your eyes and ears with 64 free verse and haiku poems,
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The Book of Days…part xxxxii

The Book of Days…part xxxxii

The Book of Days

 

The dawn’s early light can be pleasure enough for the whole day.

There are words enough to tell the story of “the temptation of day to come.”

It is my delight to write some of them for your delectation.

 

 

the marks

 

The lunar crescent

   shines through the vault,

their playground…

 

the advent of day

   chases away

      the faint marks

         of the footsteps of the gods.

 

March 4, 2024

we never see them hootin’ and hollerin’…

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The Wind and the Lion (1975)

heroic, the way it was…(movie review)

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
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you’re “it”!…my poem

you’re “it”!…my poem

choosing up sides…

 

 

you’re “it”!

 

Our playground at the school

   was bare dirt studded with big trees,

no one thought we needed more.

 

We had balls of different sizes,

we ran miles between the trees,

and we did secret things

   in the back corner

      where the teachers wouldn’t go.

 

Recess wasn’t my favorite time,

I wasn’t a star in anything,

but I grouched like my friends

   when the bell rang us in.

 

We always started a new game every day,

recess was a “now” time,

I don’t recall having “later” thoughts.

 

I think I never wondered

   how an old man might remember

      any of those days…

now I can relive some of those moments,

and I wonder about the things I forget.

 

April 28, 2024

 

remembering recess in the 1950s

behind the Blackwood Terrace Elementary School

in Deptford Township, NJ

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Book review: The Myths of Tet

How people get killed by lies…

by Edwin E. Moïse

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My first name was rain: A dreamery of poems with 53 free verse and haiku poems,
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Our Ancient Faith…book review

Our Ancient Faith…book review

think again about democracy

 

 

Book review:

 

Our Ancient Faith:

Lincoln, Democracy, and the American Experiment

 

Allen C. Guelzo

New York: Alfred A. Knopf, 2024

247 pages

 

Despite the title, Guelzo’s estimable book is not primarily or thematically about Abraham Lincoln. It is a densely researched and completely explained treatise on democracy, what it means, and what it might mean.

Our Ancient Faith opens new vistas of thought for me, and I’m thankful for my newly conceptual ideas about democracy, including the good, the bad, and the ugly. Make no mistake, democracy isn’t inherently our salvation. We’ve got a lot to do as we go down that path.

Granted, the reader will learn about Lincoln, although a good grounding in Lincoln’s life story and his times will serve the reader well.

I’m a bit leery of believing that I know for certain what a dead man was thinking when he said this and that. Guelzo perhaps reads too deeply into Lincoln’s recorded words. The book certainly is not hagiographic, and Lincoln certainly was a deep thinker, but I don’t want to forget that Lincoln was an ambitious man and a politician.

I’ll be inclined to read the book again for the expansive exposition of political thought.

The book, with extensive notes, is 247 pages, a very sensible length.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: The Snow Goose

…sensual drama, eminently poetic…

by Paul Gallico

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As with another eye: Poems of exactitude with 55 free verse and haiku poems,
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