“step by step,” the elusive rhyme…my poem

“step by step,” the elusive rhyme…my poem

smiling is important…

 

 

step by step

 

Write it, rhyme it,

write it down.

 

Write it slowly,

verb and noun.

 

Smile as much as will abide,

don’t allow your smile to hide.

 

Chase it, grab it,

cherish the elusive rhyme.

 

August 30, 2025

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: Shawshank Redemption

A world I do not want to know…

by Stephen King

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Above all: Poems of dawn and more with 74 free verse poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
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“Hear, hear,” quiet sound…my poem

“Hear, hear,” quiet sound…my poem

don’t try to unhear it

 

 

Hear, hear

 

Can you hear it?

 

You’re alone,

the walls don’t talk,

the plants don’t talk,

the rabbit in the yard

   makes no sound,

the chair just sits there,

nature’s murmuring is too far away…

 

“silence” is a word

   but if you say it…

 

Can you think a tune?

 

How much noise is “quiet”?

 

Of course,

   disdain the tintinnabulation of the bells,

but listen for that small sweet note,

and hum it for a sec…

 

you can’t unhear it.

 

August 20, 2025

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The Collected Poems of Sara Teasdale…book review

Literate, but impersonal

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many waters: more poems with 53 free verse poems,
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The Things They Carried…book review

The Things They Carried…book review

the far side of yourself…

 

 

Book review:

The Things They Carried

 

by Tim O’Brien (b1946)

New York: Broadway Books, 1990

273 pages

 

Tim O’Brien is a Vietnam war veteran.

If you served in the Vietnam war, you have a perspective for reading The Things They Carried.

If you didn’t go to Vietnam, you have a different perspective.

If you weren’t born until after the war ended, you have a different perspective.

Tim O’Brien speaks to you, read his words any way you want.

All of us are still carrying some of the things we carried in those years.

Can anyone point to feelings that haven’t changed since then?

Whether you’re a veteran or not, O’Brien invites you to get “in touch with the far side of yourself” (p. 123).

The Things They Carried is about burdens and our capacity to accept them.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: To Serve Them All My Days

by R. F. Delderfield

A beloved teacher,

      you know this story…

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The Book of Days…part lviii

The Book of Days…part lviii

The Book of Days

 

The dawn’s early light can be pleasure enough for the whole day.

There are words enough to tell the story of “the temptation of day to come.”

It is my delight to write some of them for your delectation.

 

 

Scarcely day

 

It’s early morn again,

I see that day has chased the dawn,

the bland sky is one dimension,

no color, no cloud,

no excitement in the sky,

day has come,

I make a dawn in my mind,

too soon to think about tomorrow.

 

March 23, 2023

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

Book review:

American Scripture:

Making the Declaration of Independence

…basically, it’s trash talk to King George

by Pauline Maier

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Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,
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“…remain generous of heart…”…Amor Towles (quote)

“…remain generous of heart…”…Amor Towles (quote)

we made our present…

 

 

“…if we persevere and remain generous of heart,

we may be granted

a moment of supreme lucidity—

a moment in which all that has happened to us

suddenly comes into focus

as a necessary course of events…”

 

from A Gentleman in Moscow

by Amor Towles (b1964)

New York: Penguin Books, 2016

462 pages

p. 441

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Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

84, Charing Cross Road (book review)

Helene Hanff, on reading good books…

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As with another eye: Poems of exactitude with 55 free verse and haiku poems,
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Good Bones…book review

Good Bones…book review

roller coaster ride…

 

 

Book review:

Good Bones

 

by Maggie Smith

North Adams, MA: Tupelo Press, 2017

99 pages

 

Maggie Smith knows this: “You could make this place beautiful.”

She has beautiful words, beautiful phrases, even beautiful titles in her book of poems: Good Bones.

She doesn’t make best use or best order of her words and phrases. A reader is undeniably invited to consider “sky,” but the adventure begins with colossal sky and ends with a tunnel, and the sky becomes…a soft suit. This is more roller coaster than it is poem.

Good Bones is a slow-moving roller coaster that approximately takes you nowhere.

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Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2025 All rights reserved.

 

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