“making night into day…”…“riverine,” my poem

“making night into day…”…“riverine,” my poem

Whence the wisps…

 

 

riverine

 

Whither the barren shapes

   that rise from the horizon,

and lose their form

   as they climb the sky?

 

Whence the wisps that fill small voids,

the remnants of those banks,

the shapeless swirls

   of pink and white and grey?

 

They don’t stay, defying names,

always shifting to new frames,

making night into day,

drifting as they will,

the vault is a vast current,

the waifs of one-time clouds

   fill and roil the channel,

without sound,

such patient change,

a nameless river over all…

 

November 26, 2025

*   *   *   *   *   *

My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

 

A poet is a “maker”

…and it doesn’t have to rhyme…

click here

many waters: more poems with 53 free verse poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

*   *   *   *   *   *

“walking in beauty…”…“walking along,” my poem

“walking in beauty…”…“walking along,” my poem

not so very far away

 

 

walking along 

 

With heartful eye

   I see you walking in beauty.

 

I walk your garden,

its far wall of flowers

   draws my gaze,

I may see you walking there,

I may join you…

 

The wall of flowers

   may be the end

      of the garden,

it may be a boundary,

maybe you are

   not so very far away,

maybe you can see me…

 

September 29, 2025

for my dearest one

 

*   *   *   *   *   *

My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: Saint Joan          

by George Bernard Shaw

click here

Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

*   *   *   *   *   *

A Shropshire Lad…book review

A Shropshire Lad…book review

without a lot of passion

 

 

Book review:

A Shropshire Lad

 

by A. E. Housman (1859-1936)

New York: Dover Publications, Inc., 1990

51 pages

reprint of the “Authorized Edition 1924”

 

Alfred Edward Housman embraced the late 19th poetry style of relentless rhyming,

which limits word choice and the scope of imagery.

His narratives are very simply credible without a lot of passion. It’s too easy to let a singsong rhythm be the main feature of verse after verse after verse. A lot of his poetry is written in iambic tetrameter.

Housman’s A Shropshire Lad does offer some paths to reflections, as in Section II, which is an

acceptance of the reality of the seasons, and acceptance of the reality of the rhythms in our lives,

and a recognition of natural beauty that surrounds us:

 

Loveliest of trees, the cherry now

Is hung with bloom along the bough,

And stands about the woodland ride

Wearing white for Eastertide.

Now, of my threescore years and ten,

Twenty will not come again,

And take from seventy springs a score,

It only leaves me fifty more.

And since to look at things in bloom

Fifty springs are little room,

About the woodlands I will go

To see the cherry hung with snow.

*   *   *   *   *   *

Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: The Scarlet Letter

the beating hearts…by Nathaniel Hawthorne

click here

Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

*   *   *   *   *   *

The Book of Days…part lx

The Book of Days…part lx

The Book of Days

 

The dawn’s early light can be pleasure enough for the whole day.

There are words enough to tell the story of “the temptation of day to come.”

It is my delight to write some of them for your delectation.

 

to come

 

The star of day

   troubles low clouds

      in the earliest dawning,

there is none of day,

the horizon a muddle,

the faint light

   pushes the high dark,

a promise strains in the vault.

 

November 16, 2025

*   *   *   *   *   *

My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

 

The “dime novels” in the Civil War

Think “blood-and-thunder”…

click here

Above all: Poems of dawn and more with 74 free verse poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

*   *   *   *   *   *

We Were Soldiers Once…and Young

We Were Soldiers Once…and Young

…the last battle never comes…

 

 

Book review:

We Were Soldiers Once…and Young

 

Lt. Gen. Harold G. Moore (ret.) and Joseph L. Galloway

New York: Random House, 1992

412 pages

 

Like Moore and Galloway, I salute the brave American and North Vietnamese soldiers who fought and died in the Ia Drang Valley in November 1965 in the first major combat action of the War in Vietnam.

We Were Soldiers Once…and Young is a bloody testament to the grinding horror of war. It’s too much to read all at once. It has too much death.

A North Vietnamese commander who was on the ground in the valley recalled, many years after the war, that his guiding principle had been “win the first battle.”

He forgot to mention that no one knows how to win the last battle and end all of it.

*   *   *   *   *   *

Book review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

 

Movie review: A Doll’s House

Henrik Ibsen’s classic on abuse…

click here

Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

*   *   *   *   *   *

“seeing more”…  it’s the fall, my poem

“seeing more”…  it’s the fall, my poem

losing the green…

 

 

seeing more

 

Again the dried leaves drift as they will,

they find their place,

they give up shape,

they make a final damp.

The trees just seem to let them go,

they waste away to litter,

the wind just seems to let them go,

they lose their green,

they come to earth,

a brittling maze, the huddled leaves,

they cease their swaying,

they cannot catch the sun,

nor make a shade,

they don’t look back

   to scan the sky,

to see the bosky dells,

to gaze at vistas

   that now attract the light…

The leaves have done

   with hiding the thrusting trees

      and the valley views

         and the glades that tempt the doe

            and the empty nests

               that warmed the chicks…

 

November 7, 2025

*   *   *   *   *   *

My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2026 All rights reserved.

 

The Reader (Der Vorleser)

Not just a rehash of WWII…

by Bernhard Schlink

click here

Writing Rainbows: Poems for Grown-Ups with 59 free verse and haiku poems,
and the rest of my poetry books are for sale on Amazon (paperback and Kindle)
and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

 

Your comments are welcome—tell me what you’re thinking.

*   *   *   *   *   *

Pin It on Pinterest