“…these languid clouds…”…  “Vigil,” my poem

“…these languid clouds…”…  “Vigil,” my poem

see the curtains of dawn…

 

 

Vigil

 

Impatient skies

   that rend the clouds,

the slowly tumbled clouds,

   in their shades of gray,

the skies peek through

   these languid clouds…

 

October 23, 2023

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the other you…”Looky here,” my poem

the other you…”Looky here,” my poem

the ugly bears…

 

 

Looky here

 

I didn’t mean to look at me.

I guess I wasn’t really having that much fun

   in the Fun House.

What was I thinking when I ate cotton candy

   as a kid and thought it was great?

The stuffed animals aren’t really cute…

   where do they buy the ugly bears?

I was alone, I guess that says a lot…

   who walks around alone in the Fun House?

 

Anyway, I passed the goofy, wavy mirror

   and I guess I couldn’t help it,

I looked at it quick, I didn’t really stop,

I saw me, shattered, in layers, quivery,

even if I’d had a smile on my face

   I’m not sure smiles show up in those things.

I kept walking, and I was thinking

   about what I really look like,

and I guess I realized a mirror

   probably never tells the whole story,

because the other you might have

   a different point of view.

 

May 28, 2018

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Book review: The Myths of Tet

It’s how people actually get killed by lies…

by Edwin E. Moïse

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Seeing far: Selected poems with 47 free verse and haiku poems,
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“a wild portal…”…“Passage,” my poem

“a wild portal…”…“Passage,” my poem

a ripple in the sward

 

 

Passage

 

I think to pass the wetlands,

my humdrum steps

   in line to cross the fen,

a thoughtless stroll

   to reach the other side,

but a ripple in the sward turns my foot,

a wrinkled phosphor turns my eye,

I stand, agape, at a wild portal,

its door ajar.

 

I am steeped in wonder.

 

I bethink a new imagination

   of the end of day,

I hurry through,

and, oh!…

 

December 19, 2020

“Passage” inspired by “Wilderness Doorway” by Jennifer Lagier, in the Aurorean, Vol. XXV 2020

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Book review: The Bartender’s Tale

Ivan Doig’s story, yeah, I mostly loved it…

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In other words: Poems for your eyes and ears with 64 free verse and haiku poems,
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To Serve Them All My Days…movie review

To Serve Them All My Days…movie review

getting there…

 

 

Movie review:

 

To Serve Them All My Days

 

There is an utterly familiar plot line in To Serve Them All My Days (TV mini series, 1980-1981, 11 hours, 13 minutes): a Welsh coal miner’s son survives World War I, and becomes a teacher at a boys’ school in England south of Wales, and grows in his role to become the beloved avuncular headmaster.

John Duttine energetically plays the protagonist, David Powlett-Jones. Everyone calls him “P. J.” or “Pow-Wow,” with love and respect.

P. J. quite remarkably discovers that his calling, his life’s work, is with the faculty and boys at Bamfylde School. He judges everything from this perspective.

Much of the tale is an unfamiliarly rich creation of manifestly human characters who deal with the slings and arrows of life, and make the best of their worlds to give willing, deserving boys a good education and a glimpse of how to live a decent life.

The dialogue is above average in many scenes, and you will get inside the minds of the key players. There is enough reflection and imagination and longing and joy/despair for any discerning viewer.

No spoiler alert is needed here. You can’t possibly be in doubt about how the story ends.

In this story, getting there is the point of the journey.

 

Based on the 1973 novel (same title) by R. F. Delderfield.

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Movie review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2024 All rights reserved.

 

Book review: The Snow Goose

…it’s sensual drama, eminently poetic…

by Paul Gallico

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In other words: Poems for your eyes and ears with 64 free verse and haiku poems,
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Dangerous Liaisons…not a delight (movie review)

losing sight of right and wrong…

 

 

Movie review:

Dangerous Liaisons

 

Dangerous Liaisons (1988, rated R, 119 minutes) is not a garden of delight.

If you aspire to a working understanding of good and evil, you could do worse than listen to the riveting chatter of the leading personae: the Marquise de Merteuil (Glenn Close) and the Vicomte de Valmont (John Malkovich). They choose each word with careful, deliciously ribald, austerely cruel, and domineering intent.

This is a boundless exposé of the worst elements—of human intrigue, self indulgence, hubris, vaunting egos, and careless poaching of souls—that masquerade as amour.

Dangerous Liaisons is an ultimately degraded experience for both the characters and viewers, who must condemn the marquise and the vicomte for so many lives destroyed…death is an anticlimax in Dangerous Liaisons.

The marquise and the vicomte are burdened with a moral framework that shuns the absolute—they have unimaginably unsatisfied desires, and no intellectual imperative of right and wrong.

They swirl through their lives, casually jousting with each other as they amuse themselves in controlling the fates of other men and women, without realizing that they are not in control of their own fates.

 

The movie is based on a 1782 French epistolary novel titled Les Liaisons Dangereuses by Pierre-Ambroise Choderlos de Laclos, available in English translation.

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Movie review. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2023 All rights reserved.

My first name was rain: A dreamery of poems with 52 free verse and haiku poems,
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and free in Kindle Unlimited, search Amazon for “Richard Carl Subber”

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“…sing for two hearts…”…“quickie,” my poem

“…sing for two hearts…”…“quickie,” my poem

…to murmur love

 

 

quickie

 

…wait for a verse to come,

wait for a verse to come,

and let its style surpass itself,

and let it sing for two hearts,

let it fling off care,

let it be our newest way

   to murmur love.

 

Rumford, RI

June 6, 2023

 

for my dearest one

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My poetry. Copyright © Richard Carl Subber 2023 All rights reserved.

Above all: Poems of dawn and more with 74 free verse poems,
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